Black Poetry : Monetary's Black Pearl...."Do I dare".

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn’t believe before my eyes
    This man was so tongue tie

    Lost in love…just mesmerize
    Ya know….Feelings don’t lie

    Feeling him deep in my soul
    Thought I had lost control

    As the motions flow
    He intrigue me slowly
    .....For
    Emotions ran through the air
    Do I dare…..

    Notion hit….

    Afar he caresses my heart
    I almost fell apart

    He was bold and calm
    I was already in his palms

    I could feel him molding me

    He waltz in my world
    Makin me feel whole
    As he touch my soul
    Do I dare….

    Smooth and sweet
    This man was meek
    Making me weak

    I could feel the power of him
    Do I dare…..

    As he smile…I blush
    Dayum…..I got a rush….

    He completes my thought
    Do I not…..
    Fancy dance
    in this sweet romance

    black pearl of essence
    bliss of the ruby kiss
    I can do the twist…:lol:

    For I became his ….
    Black Pearl
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop here, i'm diggin the chemistry in this one, flow on sistah, flow on :toast:
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: nice drop, you nailed this one,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte yummy release
    dat man dat man !!!
     
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    hehehe
    No wonder yall always wit them kisses back and forth my goodness smh LOL hehehe get a cyber room already sheesh :wink: you know I'm jus kidding with you sista
    this was veryyyy veryyyyy sweet :)
     
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    :flamet: Hot Sista...Hot!Hot!Hot!

    This is hot because of the passion of your wordz.

    One Love..and Jah Bless
     
  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel....

    Ok...Ok. I see. You even did the two line rhyme thing a few times. Ok. Ok. :D

    Now, you know I must respond to this right? :D

    :thanks: for the collabo on my Black Pearl poem. It's very sweet. :kiss:

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts on my poem with us.

    :toast:
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece like Oooh Wee
    :wink: :wave: :read:
     
  9. ScorpioStylez

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    wonderful

    Wonderful [oem im sure this brother will veel you on it.


    "If It's A Scorpio Then It Has Style"
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah you dared and u did the dam thing 2. :eeek:
     
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