Black Poetry : Mommy loves you!!(4 lovelygoldenone)

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  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even if no one else ever met you
    Even if they never knew what a great person you’d be
    It wouldn’t matter if they never cared at all
    Because your existence meant the world to me

    If you never come my way again
    And grace me with your sweetest charms
    I will always remember the dreams I had
    Of holding you in my arms

    You won’t grow to know pain
    And what heartache is really made of
    But you will always hold a place in me
    And you are still entitled to my love

    I wish I could have taught you
    To be a whole lot like me
    There was so much I had planned for us
    So much I wanted you to see

    I don’t know why God does the things he does
    And I can’t question him about those
    I just want to get an understanding
    Of why it was you he chose

    I wanted you for myself
    And however selfish that may be
    I just wanted you to know that if you wanted to return
    I’d like for you to come back to me.

    I know I’m not at all glamorous,
    Or rich, or powerful, or even tall
    But if love was a measure of wealth for you
    Always know I could’ve given you all.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    d*mn....its like you read my mind....wow...that was beautiful....i was tryin' so hard not to cry...beautiful...
     
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    aww man.... that was really nice of you eternal:heart:
     
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    This wasas so sweet of you eternal. Even though this was for Lovely, I felt this in my heart. Felt like you were reading the pain I've felt for years.
    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  5. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovelygoldenone, It's all love. I just know how you feel first hand.
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ThanX SwtT, preciate the love you spread!!
    E
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alizentang, so glad that someone else could get some comfort and relate to our pain...thanx.
    E
     
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    this was beautiful!!!
    so beautiful and heartfelt!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, for feeling me on this
     
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    I'm impressed, made me think of "the blueprint" (momma loves me).
     
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