Black Poetry : Momma....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *WARNING* i needed to release it today......
    its sort of long


    My enter spirit close
    as I pose this flow.
    My heart breathin so free..
    My soul is liftin…
    High of his love…
    I look into the sky…
    A tear falls..
    For today I miss you..
    My heart burns with
    Need to talk to you..
    But you went home…
    And angel above…
    Touch my shoulder as I
    Speak these words….
    If you can hear momma…
    How are you doing….
    What you been up too….
    Have you seen daddy…
    Tell grandma I love her….
    Kiss my babies
    I know there with you…
    Your memory…
    Is strong today…
    I feel you by my side…
    As the rain pours on my head…
    Killin me softly….
    Can you hear me…Momma
    If you can….
    I yearn to talk with you
    Thoughts floatin..
    Momma I need you today…
    I cry for you in so many ways..
    I wrote you a letter but I don’t
    Think you got so I speak my
    words out loud
    hopin you can hear me….
    My heart been hurtin..cant
    deal with
    All this pain…momma…
    I need you
    Balls of fire
    Hit me and torn
    my walls down…
    and then momma…
    like a diamond in da ruff…
    .he found me..
    he found me….
    pick me up and wiped
    me off…
    took me for his own…
    Momma he cherish me…
    His love is so strong…..
    Momma as these tears run…
    I needed you today…
    Momma do you hear me…
    You was ripe from me and
    Taken above….i live with your
    Love everyday…
    Did you send me my angel..
    Cause momma…
    I love him…
    Momma I am in love…
    And it hurts that your
    Not here to see my happiness…
    Momma oh how
    I wish you was here….
    I am sorry that your there…
    But it was your time to go…
    Momma…you would love him…
    Did you send him to me…
    Could you feel my hurt
    and thy pain…
    Momma can you hear me…
    The kids are getting so big…
    My brothers still doing there thing…
    I miss you today…
    I feel your presence…
    But it hurts that your not here
    To share in my happiness…
    Then I look up once more…
    And the rainbow of
    Da brightest colors show…
    My heart over whelm…
    And I felt you momma…
    Thank you for listenin…
    And sendin him to me…
    Momma…I LOVE YOU…
    Kiss daddy for me…
    Tell my babies I love them…
    Tell grandma….I be callin soon…
    I am
    ..... gonna
    ............walk
    ...............with
    ...................the rainbow…
    ..................NOW
     
  2. JAD68

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    I absolutely LOVE the flow...

    From one who knows the hurt of loved ones gone home, I feel you, and know how much the love you now have means.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very breautiful very sweet scribe
    i truely love this here .........wow!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAD68...my joy i needed to share with my mother...
    she was my best friend...so today i talk with her...thanks for the read...

    $$RICH$$...my richness thanks for the read...i really didnt think anyone would like....but i am glad you did...much love
     
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    awww, baby, this is so sweet and heartfelt. really really touched me with it's beauty. much love to you. :heart:
     
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    Gurl why would we not feel it...everybody loves "momma" :) and I'm sure she would've LOVEd this :)
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    gempis..thanks for the read...i am happy you like it..

    triniti424...girl where mine was ta day not sure it was comin right...i took a change on postin it..much love and glad you like it...
     
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    Momma is nice I was definitely feelling it. Touch my heart.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    Mr. Incognito..thanks for the read...glad you like it...much love
     
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    that was absolutely breath taken that was real nice and next time u talk to your mother and your two babies tell them that a new friend "goofy-girl"said whats up check my profile for my e-mail address
     
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