Black Poetry : Moments

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    History in a world
    Is what you recall and tell
    The time you spend
    With love one’s and friends
    Those moments should never end

    There is a special time
    That stands out from the rest

    Moments spent with someone you love
    Those moments seem to go so fast
    Do what you can to slow them down
    Savor them take it slow
    If you get the urge to take it on fast
    Do all you can to make it last

    The slow ones are the ones that linger in the mind
    The motion of the moment
    The tempo and the heat
    The passion of two making love
    Two bodies tangled head to feet

    It is awesome

    Reaching for heights so new
    Never wanting to come down

    Whisper to them….
    Bodies entwined
    Your love and mine
    There is nothing like loving you​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's moments like those that sometimes tap you on the shoulder in the midst of your day, and make you smile. So gently and sweetly expressed poet.
     
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    moments in time captured in the rhyme...
    this was dope...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can saw is aaaaaaaaaawwwwwhhhhhhhh :heart: :heart: this was so sweet!!!
     
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    I can certainly relate and bow to those moments ...^5 poet!
     
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    There is noting like the aura of your heart and soul

    That keeps me lost inside those moments of us

    For I know not a love like yours until now

    Although time physically continues to move on

    Deep inside my being is where your love resides

    The smallest thought of you sends me to lands unknown

    To feel your touch to savor your kiss

    Yes baby its moments like this

    That circulate inside my cerebral

    And liquify my body

    Resulting in a surge of passion so intense

    Only you and I can comprehend

    Only you and I are lost within

    Only you and I share those moments

    Those tender precious moments......




    Hodee:
    I guess you know I loved your flo
    it inspired me so....:)



    Much Luv
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetnes was this and Sisteer 4EVERLUV brought that beautiful accent to an already shining Poem
    Please flow on Poet:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U speak in depth here as i relate to yo words
     
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