Black Poetry : Moments

smoothsoul

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Ok, I'm a newbie, but here we go....................


After we shared the moments
that no one called ours
we left with ourselves unseperated

Yet moments bring sadness
and lovers die quickly
as we often said

Remembered are the joys, the seldom tears
the madness of us
through all the unrehearsed discussions

And we'd feel beauty
grabbing at each other
sadly, separately and in vain
for something somewhere else

We knocked down the doors
and broke most windows to our souls
and there we lay high in basements
or our families beds
for second conscious

and there we left
with madness closer than our love
with a deeper search for the only sun
 
Smoothe, welcome to the community. We are very happy to have you here.

As for your write...

It was real. You've written this one based on experience, yes?

This felt sad to me, perhaps based on what I am going through right now.

Big up for this write, it was indeed Smoothe ;) Last part was profound!

and there we left
with madness closer than our love
with a deeper search for the only sun

Keep it up! Like your flow.

One.

~Ikoro
 
welcome smoothsoul

:new: welcome to destee.com poetic playground
welcome to the new home u found
welcome from above as i bless this with love .


tyte joint love the way u express it well
madness closer then love can run deep.

again welcome within the family enjoy relax and flow
give love as love is given...:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
 

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