Black Poetry : MOMENTS OF DA COMMUNITY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Captured in seconds
    in our lifetime of togetherness
    we freeze them forever in frames
    that hang upon the walls of our
    minds

    where we pause doing brief walks
    through our museum of memories
    refreshing the living soul we hold
    in silence

    taken the trip of captivity within
    blinding a intertwined of sharing
    given devotion we smile , embrace
    and face another day ahead as we
    grow in the glo of faith and renew
    self

    those moments remain cornered in
    the wake of showed happiness
    created from the shared community
    of family , the friendz , found love
    as it rerun again and again in the
    warmth readily returns to the mental
    when we glaze once more back at
    the grace of goodness of our people
    who have pictured our lives and so
    I leave with an impression of us as one
    and a handshake

    As i look deeper in your sensuous eyez
    with this glamor of love and hope into
    tomorrow light of my forever imagination
    and kiss the dreams that we made here
    in our community made & tweed from fine
    garments & gentle heart some tender care
    this walk forever remains

    COME SHARE MY WORLD ! :hearts4: :hearts3: :hearts4:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Taking a walk down memory lane, taking in a familiarity that one doesn't want to leave, that one doesn't want to end. Some worlds need to be more deeply shared, for not to do so, has become heartbreaking. Time to kiss those dreams. Flow on brotha, feeling this.
     
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    Exceptional piece share here brother Rich.
    As I read this piece it brought all kinds of memories from the past..
    thanx for sharing...
     
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    Rich,this piece just made me feel madd good....while reading this,i thoughht about how i went back to peep some of my old work that i had on here and i saw the replies from yall and how much love people giv eon here....this is OUR community....ya **** right!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OUR community
    built on love and respect
    i like how you laid this out
    had me thinking
    awesome vibe
    my dear friend
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wow...
    If sometimes, we could turn back the hands of time. Whoaaaaaaaaaaa don't even take me there. ...lol
    Well, to be and stay on the safe side, I'm taking the 5th. :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz these are moments yhat takes me there daily
    i love it so much and the fulfilling of tomorrow new day starting again

    thankz Godssoulja we seem to alway picture in our minds the fun memories
    of the yesteryears and the now future of our happiness

    thankz LURK you know the love flow so free and feels so good we share
    in our hearts across the community with greater pride ..........................

    thankz Angel as we look back and ahead we see and revist sweet things
    and how we join together even some become more closer then ever i have
    seen the light and all it shares

    thankz queentswana yes i'm taken ya there and some it's just beautiful when
    you go back and see all the getherness and much more these are the moments
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Moments

    Rich, this is a truly beautiful poem. I have been to a lot of communities and this one is Topsl :picture: :toast: :bomb:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetrymama when you sit and look back you get warm inside
    Destee created what we call heaven on earth for people to share
    and hold on to fun memories without never feeling a goodby just
    new sweet hello's tomorrow ......thank u so much sista Queen...
     
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    Bro. $$, I truly enjoy the walks into the minds of the community, & with U as our guide, it is that much better.

    Peace & blessings, bruh.
     
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