Black Poetry : Moment...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jun 6, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walking ever so closely,
    Our trails connect,
    And affect our personal space.
    Your eyes,
    Gazing upon my face.
    Your voice,
    Only in my hearing distance,
    Volume decreases,
    Passion expands.
    Your words,
    Touching my spot,
    That I thought sensation had forgot.
    Your hands,
    Trying to emulate,
    And continuing to stimulate,
    An already established connection.
    Your moves,
    Don’t come across to me as being,
    Raunchy displays of pretend affection.
    Therefore landing your hands,
    Holding my face,
    Atmosphere set,
    Prefect timing, perfect place.
    Then the moment when our lips met…
    To be continued as soon as we let,
    It happen….
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chastity, this is happening! LOVED IT...
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the ways its going, ...It will happen for it was meant to be. Very nice drop I like where you took this. And thanks for sharing it with your new found family.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 on point this was very nicely done it the way it should be
     
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    This was laid down very sweetly, you conveyed a very gentle moment.
     
  6. SwtT

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    very nice poet...I enjoyed"momemtn" very nicely done:)
     
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