Black Poetry : Mom U Were There (Thank You)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mom you were there when I copped a fit,
    Little guns, big noise when I cocked backed back popped it quick,
    Tried to tell me about the rights and the wrongs,
    How the devil loves misery and your dad at coming home,
    But, I never really listened, I never really pictured,
    My mother being with me, what is this?

    I saw the devil and the streets calling....
    I saw hoop dreams and the gangstas calling....
    Mobb Deep had that killa muzik straight strollin,
    My mother always crying cause my ways told her,
    I was crazy and I didnt give a dam so the,
    Cops was always knocking on my door.....
    Pigs didnt care I wasnt there,
    They still came with there badges and there warrants trying to strike some fear....

    Yet the only fear that I saw is my mother wasnt happy,
    My mother was a scrappy, she did it all cause daddy,
    daddy wasnt a dad at all, just a man I called, what the hell is going on?

    Yup
    She was my mother and my pappy, when I pushed that laffy taffy,
    She still made a bed for little nappy but,

    In a sick kind of way,
    I was built for the day,
    That the devil would lead a stray,Hey!
    I got dimes in the gutter,
    And when the hammer gets ready,
    You gone die a one miles and running, Yup!

    But Mom!!
    You gave me a willing for a change,
    Gave shelter in the rain,
    gave me happiness always, and hey!!
    Its not just mothers day but mom it is everyday,
    You helped me wipe my pain away,

    So
    When you need me im hear,
    When you see me no tears,
    Cause I released all your fears,

    So
    Your son is all grown,
    My love is still at home,
    You ever need me just call my phone,
    Ill be there for you like you were there for me!!!

    I Love You
    Happy Mothers Day
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that all i can say about this little tant a man now. aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet and warm to thy mother
     
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    Tantrum,
    I was completely compelled to give you praise to the highest...^5 I felt this piece poet :welldone:
     
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    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :hearthis: HOWWW beautifuuuuuuuul and sweet !


    keepflowing bro....


    Big hug to ya bro!




    giving mom props we give mom props:band: (imagine these smilys singin it)




    hihi....








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    tru love in it's finest ....big ups Tantrum
     
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    as the wave continue at destee.com mother's day splash that's sweeping da nation poeticly
     
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    A mom is there through thick and through thin, these words are a testimony to that for sure.
     
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