Black Poetry : Modo-Yesto-Futuro

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hello everyone
    i was fighting a virus plus i had no word processor till now
    here is my latest






    Modo-Yesto-Futuro

    Modern day.
    Yesterday’s mind
    Heres mine

    Here’s my eggs, here’s a little Crisco to brisk though
    A lover of the art, the composition of flow
    They said the mind is a terrible thing to waste
    I think a corrupted mind is a terrible thing to taste

    Yesterday I stumbled, lost my orange juice, my concentrate
    The cons of the center of my character traits deflate
    Like an old junkyard, junk is stored in my brain like rusted metal
    Can’t pop the lock off my metaphorical popcorn kettle

    Struggling to wrinkle, like my cerebrum is smooth
    Nasal passages blocked, ear filled with the waxers groove
    The mind is a muscle and muscles strain and play possum
    The envo-atmos-earth you fear precipitates acid rain to prevo yo blossom

    Shakespeare won’t thy let me shroud thou cloths on me ear
    Or better yet let me shake the spear dangling hear
    Who art thou the villain, whomever it be stand forth
    Forging a valley, shoot quails in vallies to destroy my fort

    That was a street lesson, free session on my mental progression
    Now I will break it down and take time to answer questions….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in the mix fully ready
    dis was very well pose'd and u said it str8 up !
    like dis here.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q&A

    Delightful, Poet!
     
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    This was a cleverly crafted, metaphorical piece,
    quite enjoyable!
     
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    glad the virus didnt get this one :)
     
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    this is some tyte wordplay
    peace
    khasm
     
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