Black Poetry : Moderate This

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Aug 1, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand
    I really do
    The reasons why you're my shadow
    because your own life escapes you
    Moderate this
    So you think you understand
    my hopes and dreams?
    They reach much higher
    than the scope of your schemes.
    You may have an inkling
    of how everything seems.
    But in order for you to fully understand
    a life, you'd have to get one of your own.
    Can you moderate that?
    So, leave mine the hell alone,
    Can you possibly moderate a clue
    about why you don't have one?
    Time check?
    Naw, I'm not quite done.
    Can you fathom why scheming
    and swinging on a star
    shouldn't even come close
    to being all that you are?
    Can you moderate that?
    So continue to flow
    what you think you know
    and I'll watch as you grow
    and spread your brand of
    unity across this entire site.
    But, you've already done that...
    Isn't that right?
    I can moderate that.
    Can you moderate this?
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW MODERATE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE THIS PIECE!!!!!!!!! :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop..its alot of folks out there to
    feeling the vibe...Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what can and can't be .....
    tyte drop sistah flow on express
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much TheOne. Much appreciated, glad to see your face in the place.
    Vibes can often be felt I guess, thanks blkangel.
    What can and can't be indeed Rich, thank you for the support...on this piece.
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    I read this one quite a few times Sis!
    this one poses a powerful punch!

    Tight vibing as usual!!!!!
    Loving it!
     
  7. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :uzi: whew... :uzi:
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz is yo' hands on yo' hips and yo' neck poppin' like a cobra?????????:lol:
    I loved this piece man Moderate ppl Moderate :spank:
    :wink:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honored to know this was worthy of a third glance Purplemoons. Thank you.
    LOL 7thPoet, I guess that means you like it...thank you.
    Thank you Sensualreality, no, lol, no hands on my hips or anything. Let's just say that almost everyday this week has brought something new to the table so to speak...
     
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    Well dang!!! I'm not used to you soundin like this, sister, and I love love love it. Flow on with ya bad self.
     
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