Black Poetry : Mocha-Tinted Ebony Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mysslez, Feb 23, 2001.

  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    Mocha-tinted ebony man
    My heart beats for you like chanting natives to the Gods.
    Crystal brown eyes I gaze into and view the distant lands.
    Onyx waves crown your head.
    Broad shoulders uniting with 200lbs. of genuine masculinity.
    Those gentle, caressing arms of definition protect and serve my feminine frame.
    Chest of endurance upon which I lay my head to rest.
    Hands interwine with mine creating an imperishable nexus of love.
    Horse powered thighs and legs providing driection throughout the days and nights.
    From crown to sole.
    Your heart to mine.
    I cherish thee.
    My mocha-tinted ebony man.
    -Myss Lez R.A.W.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sustuhhhhhhh girrrllll!

    this 'peace' speaks to me...


    "My heart beats for you like
    chanting natives to the Gods.
    Crystal brown eyes I gaze into
    and view the distant lands."

    &

    "From crown to sole
    Your heart to mine
    I cherish thee"


    & all the truth found in between!

    Thank you for knowing


    A
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    you dun started sump'n with this peace Mysslez!

    whew ... go 'head gurl!

    :)
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooweeee...ok all hail our yummy blak brothas :jawdrop: lol
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flirt: Nice drop indeed we men hear you lady.... :coffee:
     
  6. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    Simply put, thats love
    im feelin this piece
    thats some real talk
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
  7. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this piece here.........lovin the description here........sound like a perfect man to me... :star:
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All those flavors are so yummy! Very nice visual piece!!!
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks my poeticsoulsister "Triniti"....

    this sho was a treat...

    mmm...mmm...mmm
    reminded me of my own man

    thanks for bringing this back to the forefront!
     
  10. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
    mmmm...i like this one hea...i don't even
    kno what to say...this hea is beautiful

    GOD BLESS :D
     
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