Black Poetry : Mocha Tawny Tears

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mocha tawny tears flowing effortless/ly from amber eyes

    The science of rainfall is difficult to explain; even harder to comprehend

    Why is it that -hours of sun showers are precipitated by broken promises -with a steady downpour?

    Can Jupiter Pluvious tell me...

    How does loves monsoon always seem to begin and end this rainy season?

    Just as a
    rain drop
    drops rain
    wa-ter

    My cloudbursts into mocha -tawny - tears from amber eyes
    sending
    ...a mist
    ....... a sprinkle
    ........... a drizzle of
    loves sweet condensation to my tongue~
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    n2...

    i am a firm believer in
    the notion that crying
    cleanses & purifies the
    soul... no matter the
    source of the tears... :)

    i loved the piece!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA Sunshyne - no wait, I mean "Dr. Shyne" :) hey girlie....I'm glad that you think the way I do, I agree - tears are for cleansing the soul...Spring Cleaning anyone?!

    Ha Ha...

    Thanks for stopping in for the read - again...
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...loves sweet condensation on my tongue" that's it! that's it! I am now going to the bathroom to clean up [LoL]

    well ya know peace
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You are strangely enuf -
    "Too Much"!
    But in my book; too much
    of a good thing just
    means - MO' Betta!
    Thanx for the comps...
    Love ya' doll!!
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yea!

    I remember this one! I like so very much! You such an expert at this and yet effortless. Keep reppin. Comin thru Desert Storm
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Comin' thru loud & clear -

    Desert Storm, you something else!
    Thanks again for making
    me
    CHEESE (smile) soooo hard - my cheeks hurt!
     
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