Black Poetry : Mocha Klimaxxx

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmm
    Last night,
    I lay back and allowed
    fingertips to caress me gently from
    head to foot.
    ..............I shake,
    ..................Can you feel me shudder?
    ........................Oooh chylde that makes me dizzy.

    Dizzy?
    Yes, and privy to the secret sensations of a soul-stirring
    Deja vu that left me sweltering.
    My body?
    Not truly my own,
    but tonight the canvas for my 'artist'
    to paint upon.
    With brushstrokes of passion
    and feather-light kisses and tongue-tipped moments of
    bliss, I quickly dismiss any other priority.
    Hmmmmmmm,
    My breath quickens when I feel your hands dip there.
    My lungs fill to capacity and I moan, blackout and grow dizzy
    in the same breath.
    ...give
    .....me
    .......your
    ..........own
    .............hot oil treatment;
    deeply condition my body and allow me to rise to my apex,
    my own Moonlight sonata.
    SweetKoffee Soul, embrace me with lips of oozing honey
    and make me your Smoked Honey delight.
    ......bite me mami
    .........Oooh lick me honey,
    .............make
    ................this
    ....................black
    ........................man
    ............................KLIMAXXX!!!!!
    Was I afraid to forsake my masculinity?
    Was I afraid to step outside of myself and give in
    to the virility of your sea?
    Would it be quite vulgar of me to say..hmmm...
    HELL NAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Not afraid to admit or dive right back into the streamline of
    your love.
    Not fearful of loosing myself and leaving my 'manhood' on the
    bank for a few hours of pleasurable respite.
    Sleep closes in on both of us,
    and my body drifts in a golden haze between
    reality and bliss; sated and taxed.
    Thank you Star~Kitty for helping me reach my
    silver Klimaxxx.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Earthy Feelings" Publishing
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit."
    ~The Poet is born, not made.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    Whew, who turned up the heat...
    I've got mixed emotions from this piece
    I'm hungry, I'm hot and I'm flush
    Heck...I think I'm high...

    Brother,...I'm sitting here on the hill watching you twinkle in the sky :spinstar:
    and I must say...you really know how to put on a show... :coffee:


    ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now ain't that the Poetess calling the Poet a legend?
    Baby, if I know how to put on a show....You know how to put on an extravaganza!

    Sage, we need to get together real soon and do this collabo thing! I'm serious!!!!!! You leave me flushed and feeling so so so good.

    Oooh like fresh, baked biscuits and hot molasses. Honey, this black man is definitely hungary for more of what you put out.

    You are truly special Sweets!!!!! Hit me up at [email protected] when you want to do something.
    :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades: :shades:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot tyte write poeticly

    get your membership today and become a PREMIUM MEMBER !
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha Rich. You are simply the man! Much love pa.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I particularly loved the concept in these lines:
    "My body?
    Not truly my own,
    but tonight the canvas for my 'artist'
    to paint upon."
    But you painted such a sensual vision here. Wonderful.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was just......BRIGHT....had me makin faces ova here
    I love it you painted a picture....
    Artists
    Poet
    Star:wink: :peace:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sister WAtz.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma you are truly divine
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a piece and a half, it was the piece I followed through with you...cause I got compellingly into the moment, awesome scribe.
     
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