Black Poetry : Moan

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  1. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel your tongue n my neck
    Tasting
    Feeding
    I moan
    It travels down to my breast
    Sucking
    Wanting
    My breath changes
    Quickens
    **** again I moan
    You touch me
    Your cool fingertips reach inside my boiling pot
    Hot
    You feel my heat
    You stifin
    I notice
    Your tongue tickles my navel
    Inside
    Around
    I moan
    Unfasten my jeans
    Baby Phat
    Around my ankles
    On the floor
    Your pants follow
    Your cotton
    My silk
    We remove
    My eyes
    You gaze
    You enter
    You exit
    In
    Out
    Up
    Down
    Moaning
    Calling
    Screaming
    ****
    Cumming
    Smelling
    My juices
    Your juices
    Our smoothie
    We moan
     
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    :slobber: wow....... :jump:yesssss........ :sick: its hot up in here........ i say we go out for a :drink: and get tipsyyyyy,and make this poem coem to life.........chea chea....this was hottttttttt mami,just hottttttttt........... :hearts3:





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  3. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you like it! i have more poems of this genre if you're interested. lol
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :baby: im comin back for more like a likkle baby!!!bring em on!!!just :donttell: nobody!!
     
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    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you funny. i like it. keep reading
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang cuzzin that was hot!!! U should put ur poem "F%&^ me Rough" on here im sure the family would like that one. NO not our biological family but or Destee family. GO HEAD NOW AND DROP me another hot line> MAKE ANA PROUD!!! :toast: :angel1:
     
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    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i find it i'll post it for ya.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Im diggen this and your style, I like the way you drop this, would like to get with ya on something one day.
    Very hot drop, shh I moaned from the read LOL
     
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    By golly, I think you go it! you certainly dropped it like its hot!
     
  10. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats ya'll and theone we definately could get suttin done togetha jus let me kno. glad ya'll enjoyed. try not to moan to loud!
     
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