Black Poetry : mmmmmpphh! mmmmphh! mmmph! a woman knows!!!

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmpppph mmmmph

    Have you ever get the feeling

    That something ain't quit right

    you couldn't point to any evidence

    But you just knew that all was not well

    Somehow you just could feel it deep down


    Well I got that feeling just last night

    As we laid close and snug as lovers do

    I just knew that something wasn't right

    Your familiar touch felt like a strangers hand

    And that which was routine felt like new

    Our lover's dance had a different rhytmn

    I didn't let you know that which I knew

    Cause I wasn't ready to face the music


    all day long I pondered on that which I knew

    Wondering what the homewreckers name was

    For a women knows when you've begin to stray

    (She might not say anything but she knows)

    Wondering when the hussy caught your eye

    You even had me doubting my royalty for a second

    But I had to step back and know that I'm still a queen

    Even if my king has choosen to lay and play elsewhere


    I wasn't suprise when you didn't come see me tonight

    I already had your remnants packed up and ready to go

    I practice my speech as drove to your residence

    I pull up to your house calm cool and collected

    When I arrive I saw the "new me's" automobile

    Bust out your windows started playing in my head

    But I am a queen so I am too classy for that drama


    Yet I couldn't resist taking a peek at the competiton

    As I move closer to the window I caught a chill

    I peeped into your bedroom window hestantly

    And imagine my surprise at the sight before me

    For who knew the new me was not a she but a he

    A women knows when something ain't quit right

    But how could I fathom just how wrong it was


    mmmmmpphh! mmmmphh! mmmph! a woman knows!!!
     
  2. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmpph! mmmpph! mmmpph! I see "Bill" is still up to his old tricks......wasn't ready for the twist in this mix; enjoyed your write, poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see..it wasn't Jill but Bill i feel ya i guess a woman knowz !
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang

    that's crazy

    women aren't enough?

    :eeek:
     
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    thas just plain nasty....
    but a great write none the less...
    how do two dudes hold each other?
    bout to earl....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes a woman knows even when she doesn't say... The other woman, ending up being male, naw, I didn't see that coming at all. Well written scribe poetess.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW :eeek: ummm that was nastee LOL :lol:

    But interesting most definitely :read:
     
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    Oooh! Ummm.

    Wow! NO, HE DI'NT!


    That's grounds for a killin'!

    You tell a heck of a story, sistah! Just too bad she couldn't see the signs before she got her heart involved.
     
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    speechless and definitely didnt see that ending comin..wow