Black Poetry : MMhhhhhh

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eloquence evades me
    Articulation escapes me
    Normally I can easily weave
    Similes, metaphors, allegories
    Of water… of sea
    Pulses and points of pleasure
    Ebbs and oceans of wetness
    Rivers of orgasmic currents
    Prayers that the tie will break soon
    His forceful current is much too much
    Normally I’d let the wind
    Carry my sexual frustrations
    Elations and anticipations away
    And the gale, in all his bounty,
    Gently applied pressure to carry me home
    Or the breeze would lull me into submission
    Fulfilling my every desire through his mere existence
    Normally I’d allow the sun to wash
    Over me in waves of combustible passion
    And loose myself in his unstable surface
    Or the moon would flow me
    From one end to another pinning me
    Until luminous ecstasy led me
    To Van Gough’s starry night

    Normally I’d leave much to the imagination
    However eloquence evades me
    Articulation escapes me
    And to be perfectly honest
    All I really want to say is
    Baby undress and come here
    Better yet baby come right here
    You’re welcomed in my womb
    I want you inside of me
    Let Pink surround you
    Feel your naked skin against my own
    Radiating warmth and throbbing in
    My most intimate and sensitive places
    The steel of your thighs against the
    Softness of me with my legs entangled in yours
    Or maybe my skirt around my waist
    My panties pushed to the side
    With my lips running across your chest
    When your eyes glaze over in passion
    Tasting, tickling, teasing, burning
    I yearn for total lack of inhibition
    Unbearable, struggling, lazy rapid breathing
    My entire body arching upward
    My core increasingly damp, flowing out
    Vibrantly alive, aching, unraveling, trembling
    Baby… I want to leave something to the imagination
    But I cannot because

    Eloquence evades me and
    Articulation escapes me
    All I really want to say is…
    Baby, make love to me… Now
    Please… Please… Please… Please
    I know you love it when I Beg
    So for good measure I’ll say it again
    Baby please come to me; come right now
    Please…Please… Please… Please
    I can only say it like that because
    Eloquence evades me and
    Articulation escapes me….
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What in Holy Crap is this. Holy batman the gurl is a freak. Now how is you going to do a 360 on me. talking about the nickel thing, and you pulling this. honey you need the whole bank of nickels between ya. cant take my eyes off of you one sec, and your saying MMMMMMMMMmhhhhhh. I guess you can say that after all Omarion said OOOOOOOOOOOOOOo!!!!!!!!!! whew gurl its time for some intervention im suppose to be the bad gurl. tsk, tsk. but as your sister i will also give this a five star as well. dont make me scold you no more young lady. i'll be watching ya!!!!!!!! (stop shaking your head and stop laughing, and oh stop saying Im crazy) (wink, wink):thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :terrific: :terrific: :pc: :x:
     
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    lmao... i dont' know how you knew i was shaking and saying... lmao... not a nickle.. prolly a frisbee to deflect form all angles... yeah.. i'm getting a little grown... lmao... shhhhh don't tell... (and i've been grown sinc rich turned me out on that body english...lmao...true...true)
     
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    to my sista ifucomesoftly

    yeah i'll be watching yeah rich can make you be shall i say bad. wink, wink.
     
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    Softly, Softly, Softly...
    I'm not going to leave much to the imganation either. Girl, this drop is without a doubt HELLA, HELLA, tyte and HOTT TO DEATH:flame:

    "My panties pushed to the side"

    "I yearn for total lack of inhibition"

    I can dig it. I applaud you.:terrific:
    Much Luv
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl... why you had to highlight the grown material... lmao... lmao...i do need to be hosed down when you put it that way... lol

    streetlight... streetlight
     
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    Girl you are a nut...

    Cuz I bees grown. :) Hell, those were just 2 of my favorite lines. I started to highlight the entire piece. Don't get mad because I hightlighted your FREAKNESS your amougst friends. lol
     
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    i see the freak is loose .....do i need to come and
    put ya fire out from them hot desires
     
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    hmmmm....

    tight drop, softly.....
     
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    see sis you got rich wanting to do a booty call. now i know i raised you betta than that. i'll take ya place for that if you like. i wouldnt be a trifling sista if i wasnt. and please i know your lmao i know sheesh women.