Black Poetry : Mix Brew

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Apr 20, 2005.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deception of incompletion of a transition of lives unlived with
    Illusion of disappointment in falsification of liberation
    Of the wrong conversation within a situation
    Perception of a disloyalty interception
    Begins corruption…

    Dedicated

    In the dark, a soul stands…alone. Trying to understand something held tight but never knew ...
    Betrayal was the thought…And now….All for not of a mistake


    Lost in the madness of anger
    Disappointed as the pride takes over
    For all the wrong…reasons
    Sight unclear and
    ……….. begins to destroy

    Dedicated

    Words flow as the aches cut
    In a maze
    Of a haze cloud
    Wishing to
    …fly
    ……away
    A criminal case of a
    Mistake…
    Friends were made
    Silent prayers of togetherness

    Dedicated ….

    In a dream, we touched
    And formed a bond
    Made the heavens sing
    And the birds dance
    ………across the skyz
    Into the orbs we were
    In a world made for two
    Now….
    My eyes close and
    Nothing comes in between
    …. Anymore

    Dedicated …………..


    (c) 2005
    untitled chapter
    Poetry by an Angel



     
  2. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poweful imagines come into my head as i read this piece
    I see a mirror images of broken glass
    They on the floor
    Every piece shinning a different reflection
    After all its all in perception

    :angel1:
    Thank you for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ! sis this was one great powerful read and poem
    i love the depth of this one like always u bring it strong & correct
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz BlkAngel

    You got deep on this piece. Dedicated vs betrayal and deceit.

    :thanks: for sharing this piece with...the Fam. Someone will learn and grow from this piece.

    :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    Lost in the madness of anger
    Disappointed as the pride takes over
    For all the wrong…reasons
    Sight unclear and
    ……….. begins to destroy



    ^^^YESSSSSSSSSSSS.....indeed this is true....i feel your every word with this peace here....the last stanza opened up my eyes like whoa...mami this flow is tight,and the words are beautiful...nice ,nice peice...
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *CLAPPING* *CLAPPING* *CLAPPING*

    Yeah, you got that one off sister, and it spoke in a thousand different languages. ^5​
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE the varied rhythms of this deep flow, sis.
     
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    I have to echo the sentiments of QT
    she nailed it...

    Very nice flow sister!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the supporting love on this piece

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I love this magical mystery tour!
     
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