Black Poetry : Misunderstood...but its all good..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 11, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont care if it the biggining of the year!
    its the year of expression!!!!
    no ****ty swollow
    no stiffy barrow
    Dont take it personal..
    unless you had sumthing to do with it..
    family..
    friend
    lovedone
    neighbour..
    i,m just dealing with poeple who are close to me..
    i never ment the outsider ,cause we no one is..
    The hard laughs instead of the comfort..
    the hard laughs..
    the hard laughs..
    as God recorded them on tape..
    and angels cried....
    as doves saw me bleeding..
    The hard laughs..
    instead of the warm physical embrasse..
    the hard knocks..
    instead of some peace full days..
    A view fallen angels could hear the cry..
    the cry that was there as a child..
    Twisting her story were demons dwell..
    sending her flowers straight out from hell
    Love is is her life ...
    Love is her light..
    Love is her food..
    Love is her walk..

    she was misunderstood..

    but its all good...









    ( to be continued)
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this write lady
    heartfelt with
    emotions pourin
    flow on....release...
    i be readin...
    Peace Angel
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got my attention...

    Excellent piece scribe, love the mysterious vibe and the altruistic and realistic points of view.
    This was something to sink your heart and you mind into...How often the "different/gifted, are "MISUNDERSTOOD", IS IT REALLY ALL GOOD MY SISTER?
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :read:
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angel..(cause you were one of the fallen angels)

    funny mscloubs i just responded on youre picture...
    thanks sweet..


    what i mean with its all good is...

    do you know this song of bobs were he sings "'they eat the bread of sorrow""

    what i mean with its"" all good.."""

    is everything has his time..
    gods eyes are never sleeping they are everywere..
    everything that is hidden will come to light..
    every walk of every person will be revealed..
    and god knows were everyones his heart is..

    so thats what i mean with its all good..



    but you feld me right sister....


    you feld the hurt ....witch isnt a nice feeling..
    but love is hurt at times....




    but its ok..
    i,m living for a higher living..



    Love L
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mo mo mo !!!!!
    dis was so warm and felt deeply
    so heart felt fill wit emotions & cares
    mixed
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah sister
    this is good
    nice one
    misunderstood
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  7. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight! "it's the year of expression"!!!!
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartfelt, I've got an eye on you....Nicely put

    praise
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed. LOVED IT...
     
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