Black Poetry : Mistified by Misty

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking out over the Sea called Love
    A mist enveloped the Lighthouse
    A mist so thick that even the Light was having trouble penetrating it
    The mist seeped its way inside the House of Light
    As I was confused about what was going on
    Until the mist formed into that of she
    Who dwells in the mist
    And then I knew she came for me
    Wrapping her arms around me
    The mist began to mystify
    And transport me to lands I had never before seen
    Feeling her warm skin next to mine
    Yet she was just a vapor
    But a vapor with substance
    As she kissed me and almost suffocated me in her passion
    The mist was warm
    And the temperature kept rising
    As she swirled around me
    Sending me in a state of Xtasy
    And just as suddenly as she came
    She retreated again into her vaporous form
    Seeping back through the door
    As the mist flowed slowly and silently
    Over the Sea called Love
    Vanishing into the night
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Bishop!!!
    I like this!!!!
    How eluding. Let's your imagination flow.
    Very nice..
    MisTy
     
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    Bishop's writings make me weak in the knees!
     
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    I'm glad to affect you in such a way sista steele...
     
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    Steady girls...

    I agree with sista steele...you do make a woman weak at the knee's...this was beautiful!!!!!!!! But ladies we must restrain ourselves lest they think they are winning...."HEY WHO GOT THE TALLEY SHEET!"

    Blessings On Ya House!:D
     
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    Bishop break it down again to sho how da sea of love
    works in waves
    any lady wanna ride.......!?
     
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    Sista Steele & MsLuciousB....Love is my Domain...as the Son of Love as well as its Guardian...I must fulfill my purpose.....My purpose is to love you, don't fight it....embrace it...it will do you good.....
     
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    great piece bishop

    started it off real strong

    that real important for me

    when i'm reading someone elses poems

    i get board easy

    this really kept my attention

    keep it up

    i'm feelin u
     
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