Black Poetry : MISTAKES

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When they are made do we care
    who are hit wit such flair
    at what cost must one bare
    well here's my story let me share!

    I made some mistakes
    I let them flow
    hurt someone my heart truely know
    now my soul lay here on da flo
    because it hurt me even much more

    I can't turn by da hands of time
    but i move forward wit intent in mind
    to recapture the warmth of it's kind
    so my heart can make up da lost time

    I'll comeback gentle, sweet and slow
    no need to rush but let us grow
    into da celebration of two souls
    for every mistake dat i made
    X3 my heart will engage

    I will turn it around hold ya hand tight
    at all cost to do what's right
    and too all i will stand and put up a fight
    because what's for me is my delight
    i will make up night after night

    mistakes are so easy to do
    but to correct them is to be true
    and tenderly understand da one u did it to
    see friends are like lover's too
    saying sorry just won't do

    Here what i say to you !

    Yes i'm sorry for my share
    but let me tell you how much i care
    show you that i'll always be there
    and shower you wit da beauty of flair
    make up wit a warm hug
    compromise through his eyes da man above

    I'm gonna walk in slow gentle and mild
    take my time as live in ya smile
    treasure ya essence and greatest of pearl
    let you know ya #1 in my world
    asure you wit da gift of security
    lay down my will of confess so u can trust
    wit no worries or less

    Mistakes are never taken lightly
    and always seem remotely
    but how many go back to pick up the pieces
    well i willing to mend them back
    give my all and never again slack
    somebody please give me my babe back !

    Mistakes made can change any tune
    close doors to many rooms
    bring up a wall and leave da cocoon
    shut down and often all too soon
    maybe forgiveness can be my spoon

    feed me !
    I'm sorry !
    Missing Thee !
    forth art we !
    ya my babe !
    see !

    Listen to my heart cry out.



    A Dyamondluv Plea
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  2. epiphany

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    ....A heartfelt plea,

    As we are human beings...mistakes will be made....

    However, in taking responsibilty for those mistake we live and grow
    and the people we affect will come to forgive, because your true sorrow
    will be revealed in your actions...

    you're on a roll...your $Richness$
    :fairy:

    epiphany:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to live in "her" smile...

    ...is something very few "men" truly think of...BUT it is a WONDERFUL place to be.

    well written, $$RICH$$ MAN.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sister E.....you right i confess and take my place in fault......just man up

    Baller......man i live inside her smile deeply as we get past it all to a new day

    thank u both for the warm words i needed it.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If every man was a humbled as you....or every woman for that matter, we would have more loving and less fighting in the world.

    More working it out, than getting divorce.

    A deeper commitment to the word Love, in all its forms and expressions.

    Detachment of pride is a hard lesson for many to learn. Many let it ruin their whole life.

    You Dear Friend have defeated it, in such a masterfully artistic and heroic way.

    :spinstar: Truly admirable
     
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    Thankz sweet apple*pie it's just sometime we get caught up in the fun stuff
    and don't stop to think about the other half who are so dearing to yo heart
     
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    man

    even i'm listening

    you made mistakes and ask forgiveness

    owning up is half the battle hopefully forgiveness is given
     
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    yeah !......me too bruh ! thankz
     
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    Your Richness - You have spoken truth and those in search of it will heed your words. A Mistake is the Arch-teacher of man and woman. Some never learn its lesson and are doomed to repeat it for an entire lifetime, a wasted life. Some learn the first time out and practice not repeating it, an embraced life. "Detachment of pride is a hard lesson for many to learn. Many let it ruin their whole life"- true words from a sweetapplepie and most applicable here. I indeed like the choices you made from the words you've written. Heed the words or pay for not doing so-his "Richness" has spoken. HH
     
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    Yes brother if only we all could live by it we could move to a better well being
    Thankz HH u said it as i live it now .....
     
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