Black Poetry : ...mistakenly...

LovelyGoldenOne

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Apr 16, 2003
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...down south...
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my body
weak

mistakes ive made they won’t leave
i forget and they come back calling me
on the outside looking in im just fine
but if only you knew the nights I cried

on my
knees

soaked pillow drenched with my tears
a tear for every mistake over the years
only God truly knows and feels my pain
He was there when i could only cry his name

i cried
“God please…”

Mistakes haunt me and taunt my dreams
Don’t wanna go back to the torn heart seams
My heart was hurting and my soul it bled
But all God wanted me to do was forget regrets


He answered
and came to me…
 
LovelyGoldenOne said:
my body
weak

mistakes ive made they won’t leave
i forget and they come back calling me
on the outside looking in im just fine
but if only you knew the nights I cried

on my
knees

soaked pillow drenched with my tears
a tear for every mistake over the years
only God truly knows and feels my pain
He was there when i could only cry his name

i cried
“God please…”

Mistakes haunt me and taunt my dreams
Don’t wanna go back to the torn heart seams
My heart was hurting and my soul it bled
But all God wanted me to do was forget regrets


He answered
and came to me…



i love the way you did the title
I loved the way you did the stanzas
I loved the way you did the format
you did a fantastic job
I loved how the words flowed

this was royally done

Peace

Patrice
 

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