Black Poetry : missing you

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    millenniumtwoplusone (mmone)


    I'm missing you--
    it's been a while since we--
    laid words on each other--
    pleasing verbs and coagulated letters--

    arousing without the physical aspect--
    as yet...

    no phone calls--
    'cuz i've been back and forth--
    but i do miss you--
    do you miss me?

    deep inside i know the answer--
    and hope to be correct--

    what i feel is...

    lost without your presence.
    wandering amongst the day--
    'til the night's remains sprinkle sleep across thine eyes...

    but let's not jump the topic...
    ........i'm
    on missing you.

    d e e p l y
    until my heart's grown fond of your laughter

    do u miss me?

    (i hope so.)

    sean.
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope so too...
    Nice One Sean :heart:
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks nita

    thanks a mil for the support.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEAN....

    i can't deny it any longer... i miss you...

    okay.okay.okay... it's not about me... but a
    girl can wish... correct?? :wink: this was
    wonderful... as usual...

    keepdoinittous... :)

    AlwaysLove...
    SUNshyne~
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i miss sunshyne too...

    i miss u 2 shugah!

    thaks 4 tha luv...

    sean.
     
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    Very Nice

    I always feel your rythmes poetsean you're one of my favorites.
    Desert Storm
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really cute Sean, gave me a nice vibe.. flow on brotha..

    8th!
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you all could vibe

    it wasn't much...I just had to put down something that i was thinking and this is what came about. Thanks once again for all the support!

    sean.gregory.perkins
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, sean. quite nyce....
     
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