Quiet Poetry Lounge : Missing You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skyblue21234, Jun 22, 2002.

  1. skyblue21234

    skyblue21234 New Member MEMBER

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    I miss the way your outspoken voice massaged
    my eardrums,to find the way to my open mind.

    I miss the way your thirsty eyes,
    dranked my large cup of beauty.

    I miss the way your height disabled me
    to reach the the softness of your kiss,
    without standing on the tips of my toes.

    I miss the sensation of your hands,
    As it awakens every nerve in my body.

    I miss the smell of your scent,lingering in the back of my nose,
    helping to replay the flashbacks of our precious times together.

    I miss the feel of your skin as it touches mine,
    while we are completing the steps to reproduction.

    I miss hearing your thoughts,as they joined the end of my sentences.

    i close my eyes wishing you were here,
    hoping you can read my mind as it tells you,

    I am missing you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply beautiful and the way u express how u missing the mate
    flow on and say it loud
     
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    skyblue21234 New Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome keep lovin it means so much
     
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    I feel u Skyblue cause i m missing my man right now to. Excellent piece
     
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    YEAH... MISSING U ... U SAID IT WELL
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diimond defintely feels that ...
    wonderfully poetically flowing words
    I too know the feeling
    of missing someone who sent your heart reeling
     
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    kayb0mb New Member MEMBER

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    very simple and real

    calm, expressional and realistic, thanks for sharing for i am missing someone.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this is sweet in it's sentiment...lovin the language
     
  10. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You made me miss them too go girl that was some as ya'll say
    "type Flow"
     
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