Black Poetry : Missing you

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Singing:I'm calling you this last time baby
    because i never meant to hurt you,but lately
    I can't sleep at night
    Poem

    Because i keep thinking about you being by my side whispering, I love u
    And i would smile and say i love you too boo
    Those three words got us through for a while

    I remember how we use to share a mirror to comb our hair
    And you liked me in front so you could stare
    Lower body rising from the sexiness of my glare
    And I knew because I felt you there

    We use to have picnics in the living room
    long walks in june
    body rubs under the moon
    Winter barbecues with no coats on while slow dancing to night moods
    Reflections of us romancing tatooed on the leaves in the fall
    I miss our sillhoutes on my bedroom wall

    I can still see us lying bare in the rain
    Making love for hours and hours
    and I'd devour showers of your body sweat while repeating your name
    **** I miss you!

    We use to have debates at two in the morning
    because you know you hated to be wrong
    And I can still hear you singing silly love songs,
    even though some of the words were missing
    I miss your warm sensous kissing

    I miss you not being around when my day didn't go right
    I miss your head resting on my *** at night
    I miss your honey inside of me
    I miss our love being tighter than a summer's eve breeze in my
    spandex jeans
    I miss you missing me!

    I miss the sound of your voice
    and the smell of your cologne
    Even your curse words turn me on
    Your lines were never rehearsed
    You put me first
    So no matter who I'm with,
    This love I have for you will forever be missed

    Singing:And I'm missing you like crazy
    Body and soul is aching
    I'm missing you baby,
    and I just wanted you to know
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....surely one will hear
    da words of love & care
    how u miss the touch
    gentle smile and every word so much
    hope this reach one heart
    so they know ya beings .....

    this really touch me deeply flow on express.
     
  3. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you RICH:)
    I love performing it too!
     
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    Im missing you
    Feell like my hear is cursed
    This the worst
    I mean the worst feeling
    I have never felt like this
    Makes me so sad
    Your pics make me so glad
    Your voice could wipe away this sad
    Love but im not mad
    I think about
    The times we walked
    Walked up on the lake
    I turned off the game
    So you could watch
    Lifetime all day
    I cooked for you
    You never had to ask
    If we were struggling
    You had it all
    Even if it was my last
    I broke into tears
    The first time
    You said L-O-V-E
    And I felt the same
    Just wasnt expecting
    For you to
    Be feeling the same
    In this whirlwind
    Of love deceptions and lies
    Full of hatred
    Fear and alabies
    I miss you
    Every breath
    Every thought
    Is I miss you

    Singing:And I'm missing you like crazy
    Body and soul is aching
    I'm missing you baby,
    and I just wanted you to know
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Forgive me if I sound dumb but>>>>Am I suppose to spit back at you?
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cursed heart.....

    first of all i like to say what's up and i love what you done to this piece. i very much felt the emotion in this. this was as if me and you was having a regular face to face talk. flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you nevar,that means alot to me! :kiss1:
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful ... got me wonderin' if that special someone is in the room .... Are they? Real and from the heart ...Keep flowing
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ms.mocha
    Girl I wish:blowkiss:
    It's part real and part fantasy:blowkiss:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No sister
    I just showing love to you
    You never have to spit back
    Its just a form of expression
    Much Love Sister
     
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