Quiet Poetry Lounge : Missing you

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  1. PurpleMoons

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    Baby, why am I feeling this way?
    How is it possible that I can be happy and sad at the same time?
    How is it possible you'd become part of my mind?
    Everything about you has trapped my soul in your beautiful eyes.
    You've become the marrow in my spine
    Every part of me wants to be connected to your side.
    Touch my mouth with your hands. Touch my heart with your soul.
    Whose pulling the strings? When did I lose control?
    I tried to vision a waterfalls with water streaming down.
    It's essence had the color of a crystal blue star.
    A haunting desire to be where ever you are
    I wanted to stand at the bottom and let it come crashing down on me,
    cleansing me of my agony, setting me free
    but when I looked up at where the water reached halfway from the edge
    I saw your face illuminating, and my hunger was fed
    I stood at the bottom stuck in all its beauty, interpretated in the image of you.
    My moods have been fluctuating up and down. always searching for a clue
    I love you so much, that all I can breath is the sweet addicted taste of you.
    Surely the creator knows my discretions.
    But I guess this is a price I must pay for such a beautiful gift.
    The gift of having you, for my ultimate completion.
    Upon the back of an eagles spread, I sit soaring through the wonders of an untangible sky.
    My heart ragging to find my love. The journeys to long to walk, so I decided to fly
    As I crossed a vast sea, I peirced into the oceans waves and I thought I saw a reflection of you,
    but then realizes that it was only I. I understood that your love resided in me. So I love and I cry.
    I love you by loving me. But still I'm missing you.
    I wonder if you know how deep your love has scarred my heart and mind.
    If for me, you struggled with this too.
    How far my spirit will traveled just to drink of your lips.
    Without you my soul rest idle.
    Slumberly sleeping until you return, to wake me from this dry spell
    . Where ever my minds eye find you, I'm baited and lured into a very sticky silhouette.
    So I cry because I'm Missing you. I've been touched by pure Love's sweat
    A love so furious, so strong, so passionate, so patient
    that it will devour any man that schemes to steal my heart.
    One might say that this love is not healthy. But if they looked into your eyes and saw the beauty I saw
    Their health too, would be a small price to sacrifice only a part .
    Dressed in atleast 20pds of cloth, on the back of a camel beaten up by the dessert sun.
    My lips scorched and parched. Someone said I'd find you there.
    The dessert sand cutting into my uncovered face, and massive debris in my hair
    I can hear your voice calling me on the dessert winds. but still, I can't find you there
    I race foward never once stopping, not one minute to spare.
    Longing to be at you side.
    A screeching sounds cause my eyes to pop open, Just as I caught a glimps of your eyes.
    My mind has tricked me again. Oh no! what am I going to do?
    It's been 1 hour, 49 minutes, 23 seconds and I'm crying because still, I'm missing you!!!
     
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    hey sistah purplemoon where u been
    dis was awesome tyte had me all into it
     
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    Seems like you have been swept away by a love that weighs heavily on the mind, I liked this descriptive piece.
     
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    Hello my Richness! (waving)
    I been around. Just doing
    my lurker's thang. happy
    you liked the scribe.


    Lol! Watz. Shhhhhhhhhh!
    I won't tell if you don't tell.
    Hmph! descriptive? Thank you!
    Happy you liked it!
     
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    u know i be lovin it when u come floating round
     
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    Koolaide :D
    Your making me :blush:
     
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