Black Poetry : Missing You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kimdricka, Mar 10, 2003.

  1. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How I do miss you so
    More than you can ever know
    Do you miss me too?

    Do you miss me like I miss you?
    Or do I cross your mind
    when your mind has time
    .....to think about me

    I've been missing you
    Every since you left
    You moved the biggest part
    Of my existence
    Thousands of miles away

    So I have no choice but
    To miss you like I do
    You are part of the reason
    why I exist

    You dig? Do miss you miss me like I miss you?
    Do you miss me? :confused:
     
  2. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do...

    i'm really feelin this one. i haven't heard from my man in almost two months and i just found out that he's in jail. so this hit close to the heart...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    far away yet so close so new .......I miss u
    felt ya emotions on dis one
     
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    mmm mmm mmm...

    been there... experienced that, chile!
    i'm feelin' your flow & the longing &
    frustration it embodies. thanks for
    sharing!

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
  5. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, I felt the wistfulness, hope, and melancholy in this piece. Your words were so sweet and heartfelt. I can definitely remember feeling like this many times in my young life. Peace.
     
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