Black Poetry : "missing you" ((an angelicsage & jh col-love-aration))

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [COLOR=sky blue]
    it's been a day in eternity since we've spoken, seconds ticking ever so slowly
    The evening hush of this day's end somehow makes me feel closer
    The brilliance of color that trails the sun, reminds me of your smile
    And as l sit in discontent, the stars begin to sparkle
    One by one they adorn the sky with whispered innuendos to my heart
    Letting me know, you're all right...even though we're miles apart

    Needing to feel you, hear you...lf l could only see you
    The kiss we've shared no longer sustains
    l'm missing you, although cliche'.........like crazy
    Closing my eyes, l pretend the caress of the wind,
    ls the touch of your hand, feeling inside that it really is
    And as the light of the night shines on my face,
    We are connected in this way....

    Emotional rambling and a lover's dismay? Maybe but
    l'm missing you and it can't be conveyed
    incomprehensible, l hold, l pray, l long
    for another day,
    to love you........a blessing
    nothing soothes, l am full....with tears

    missing you[/COLOR]


    again
    l lay for another day
    dreaming you're lying next to me
    until open my eyes
    seeing blue skies shift to a hazy gray
    at my morning cries, whirling aimlessly within
    ln a crazy way
    l miss you

    l never thought...
    kissing you would be a virtual reality
    a fantasy....l would be awaiting
    Until time, as though it was hating.. parted us
    into two seperate seas with desperate pleas
    to again be....... one fountain
    flowing endlessly upon this dry land that
    time has set between us....

    lf only destiny would have seen us
    next to earth, l the Sun and you....my Venus....
    around candlelight, would our past and future rotate?
    would we slow dance.... slowly, in a rhythm of eternity
    far away from time
    but this........... is not so
    l have gone from suspensful hoping to a yearning wish
    lf l could only hear more than a distant (((hello)))
    ...more than a remote (((l love you)))
    l need to touch all of you
    as l hear your isolated voice.. echoing over distance
    through september breezes and autumn's solacing tone...
    l'm all alone.
    come home.

    l miss you

     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    tyte y'all bout to take it to new high
    lovin all dis here
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    I AM LOVEN THIS...IT IS TIGHT
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to $$R, mzblkangel, and of course the queen of love's passion, angelicsage :wink:

    peace..
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I fell in love with this poem ..:sigh:....:)
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Well..........first I have to give some love to my poetic passion partner.....J'hiah......my exclusive col-love-arator!....You got me on
    this I was like "WHOA" what a suprise ending.........I loved it! I'll pm u on this!



    Rich...Thank you......there are always new levels to reach when your talking about Love...but you already know that! :)


    Mzblkangel...thanks for taking the time to drop us a line...I couldn't have done it without a Prince such as J'hiah by my side! Thanks


    SwtT.........(fell in love, Girl?).........that is so sweet...Muchluv to U!
    Your support is appreciated
     
  7. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful..... (snaps)
    beautiful..
    passionate.
    I don't know what else to say..(snifs)
    got me feeling all emotional .
    WOW
     
  8. true love

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    What a sweet beautiful collaboration. You guys were right on point. Please grace us with some more.
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte yall shoould collab more often
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this.....i know the feelin'...
     
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