Black Poetry : MISSING U....

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, I’m missing u while u are away
    Sometimes it’s hard to just get through the day

    Because I can’t see your handsome face
    Or roll over in our bed and feel your strong embrace

    Although we talk several times a day
    Baby, I’m still missing u while your away

    They say, that absences make the heart grow fonder
    It’s been several weeks and I can’t help but wonder

    When will I hold you in my arms again
    Or when will I see that sexy little grin

    I’m trying hard to not miss u so much
    But then I start to think about your gentle touch

    Or how you hold me in bed at night
    And the feeling you give me when u squeeze me tight

    I know this separation is just for a short time
    And when u get home you will be all mine

    That’s why I’m writing you this little rhyme
    To help me get through this awful time
    Of being without u for a little while

    I will wait patiently for the day
    That u will be back home with me to stay
     
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    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice...

    I enjoyed it. It reads like a sweet lovers lullaby


    SmoovV
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This reminds me of a song:
    Love letters straight from my heart...
    Keeps us so near, while apart.

    Quote for missing someone:
    "Whenever we're missing a loved one..just smile,
    cause somewhere in the world, they're smiling with you."
    <energy travels afar>

    Wonderful piece poet ...^5
     
  4. sweettee29

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    LUV, GIRL YOU CAPTURED THAT EMOTION
    I LOVED THIS PIECE

    :darts:

    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is difficult to get through the day when you're missing that special someone, but love connects us in so many ways, that you can feel his presence somehow without him being there. Endearing piece.
     
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    Awww.. this is nice & sweet!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely he heard yo cry
    and coming home this was warm
    he missin u too............................
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoov:
    Thank you, your too kind:)

    queen:
    Thank you for that quote. I like that.
    You luv and kind words are so appreciated.

    Hey sweettee:
    Thank you girl. Just getting some feelings
    out thats all. I do miss him so much:)

    watz:
    You know what you said is so true.
    I'm missing him so much I just had to write
    about it. Thank you so much for the visit
    and words of kindness.

    Hello sonnee:
    I smiled when I saw you hit this thread.
    I really appreciate you stoppung by.
    Thank you ever so much.

    $$RICH$$:
    LOL, you are so sweet, its just
    ridiculous...I hope he did. Thank
    you for checkn' out my flo.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm sure he did because he told me so.
    ur sweeter
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwww!!!!!!
    This was so sweet!!
    Shed a little tear real quick while readin'.
     
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