Black Poetry : missing my soulmate

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here waiting on the tears to come
    For their arrival will be more than welcome

    For I need a healing for my deeply torn soul
    For as days pass the tear turns into a hole

    How do I get over the lose of my completion
    How do you forget that you had perfection

    So interwined that your souls were part of a whole
    As If God created you both from the same mold

    Everyone says things happen for a reason
    And that certain people are only for a season

    If I knew that our moment would be over so soon
    Then I'd of never let you out of our love concoon

    Without you knowing just how much I loved you
    Without you knowing that you are a part of all I do

    But now I won't be able to see you till the pearly gates
    So in my heart I carry you till we meet again dear soulmate
     
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    I feel ya heart!
    Love strong, take courage, hold ya head up, ya know?
    DS
     
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    Wow!!! I'll cry for you!!! That was awesome...each word, each line...
     
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    All I can say is Beautiful.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt ...stay strong and up-spirit
     
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    Wow, I felt this poet, very deeply written. You will get past this and smile.
     
  7. MRS. LADY

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    wow... feel you...

    keep ya head up!
     
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    Hey asimplepoet
    It always good to let it go in the flow
    Your scribe was awesome, you express what
    made your heart heavy in this drop.
    Feeling your piece deeply.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thought of my soulmate again today i miss you rip kfr
     
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    Sister Poet asimplepoet,

    I know this pain, sis. I lost my husband some years ago. And sometimes I can still feel his warmth and touch. Hold on to his love but not so tightly that you possibly overlook the love of another. Warm heartfelt piece. (hug)
     
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