Black Poetry : Missing my angel

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i laugh i think of you

    when i smile i think of you

    when i cry i think of you

    when i sit i think of you

    when i write i think of you

    when i work i think of you

    when i pray i think of you

    i think why i had to be you

    why not me in place of you

    the world is cold without you

    one day i'll be able to join you

    but till then i'll be missing you


    :angel1: :angel1: :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    miss me not
    think of thee
    hold it close
    ya eyez will see
    i will be
    colser to thee
    miss me not
    forth i am already
    there
    look up !

    this was sweet and felt when u miss something or someone ya heart
    can spell out the deepest of warmth until that time remain in shine ..
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaahh you gonna make me cry. Oh how sweet and beautiful this piece is.
    Im sure they know. Lovely write Poet of the Week

    Much luv to you.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought of my angel today so I had to read this again. I'll still miss you till the earth stops spinning and night turns into day
     
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    still feeling you on this as well and yes the path to re-asure you that your
    dearest of Angel y'all will reunite.
     
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    My heart pierced when I read this
    Much luv to you sis.
     
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