Black Poetry : Missing Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Sep 27, 2001.

  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been in a daze for two or three days
    Thinking about the one that means so much to me

    Never have I felt the true love of a friend

    His words caressed my mind and my soul
    Always making me feel like the beautiful one
    He appreciated me for all those that didn’t

    Lost in the thick of trees,
    I could not see the forest
    But it is his words that lead me to my rescue

    I have made that deadly mistake,
    I am facing that moment I wished to never see
    I became a negligent friend
    My mind wondered in the scheme of things

    I have been in a daze for two or three days
    Thinking about that friend that I know means so much to me

    What am I to do?
    I have called,
    I have written
    I have wished and hoped to be forgiven….
    But only to be handed the gift of silence

    I have hurt him, being the selfish one that I can sometimes be
    Learning from my mistake, changing my ways,
    I am more sorry than ever

    Does he not hear the sincerity in my voice?
    Feel the flow of my emotions through written word?
    Can he not see my hearts sorrow?
    Or recognize the tears that have repeatedly stained my face?

    Never really expressing my thanks for his being,
    For his presence in my life,
    I regret this as it may be too late

    I realize it now more than ever,
    Because you never know what’s good ‘til good is/is almost gone

    I have pushed away my friend,
    A friend that I love so much…

    I cry,
    Fearing that he is truly “through with me”
    Scared that we will never again be in touch

    Blk Kween
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such beauty in this sadness.

    BE
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blk Kween,

    Loving and losing...very hard to take,
    I really loved your words.:eek:
     
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    Remby Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Heartbeat, such beauty in sadness, this is a powerful peice.

    Remby
     
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    tears

    serve to soothe our pain, and provide the moisture we'll need to soften our hearts....for that second chance....for the 'next time'.

    Yes, this is beautiful.

    a
     
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    Touching.....
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure he appreciates the flow coming...keep hope alive.
     
  8. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keeping hope alive?

    Hope gradually fades with time Bishop.

    Why should one keep hope when subliminally he gives no reason to keep hope?

    ..and I am not too sure if he appreciates this flow at all.....

    but thanks for your read.

    Blk Kween
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope is a attitude that's built upon faith...just because it seems like all hope is gone, doesn't mean that it is.....depends on how bad you want something......Like I said...Keep Hope Alive......
     
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    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still hoping...

    Thank you Bishop
    I can hear you as you speak words of truth.
    It is an attitude only acquired through faith..and that I do have.

    Hope is still alive.
    Knowing each other since the winter of 99'....
    I hope he knows my heart and my mind as I thought...
    and we'll reconcile our differences

    Blk Kween
     
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