Black Poetry : Missin' U

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i stare at these four white walls
    isolated from all
    You ARE missed
    i get real blue
    from memories of me and you
    You are BEING missed
    i try to cope
    but instead i just mope
    I AM missing you
    i think about you harder
    which makes the days longer
    this fire called "desire"
    is burning deep within MY
    four walls
    please extinguish the flames
    that our sweating out YOUR name
    "out of sight out of mind" some may say
    THAT
    you will never be
    as long as
    YOU are missed
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MISSING U TOO
    FROM OUT OF FLIGHT UPON U THIS NIGHT
    I SHO MYSELF TO YO SWEET CARESS
    PUT OUT YA FIRE THAT U DESIRE
    I AM DESTINY OF LOVE FROM ABOVE
    IN YO GROOVE THATS SO SMOOTH
    LADYBUG TAKE HOLD AND ACCEPT MY HUG!
    MISSING U.......

    FLOW ON HEA!! SMILING BIG
     
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    Sis the things we go through for men
    Missin 'em for days
    Callin and not getting returned page

    They call this thang love
    THe game is run like Reversi
    They say that appsence makes the heart grow fonder(And it grows harder)
    To tame your inner flame(ANd plays with your mind)
    Wishing for thangs to change

    Wanting them(when they could care less)
    Cheatin or even creatin unwanted stress
    Playin guessin games or rush and rulet

    Brothas make it difficult (for a gurl to get some sleep)
    Just throw the sheet over ma eyes(And cry ma self to sleep)

    Try to forget
    Overwhelmed as of yet(yesterday)
    Has become the past

    Desert Storm
     
  4. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes

    i felt this in my soul, had to show some love
     
  5. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich
    thanks for the response, but you don't eva have to miss me me because i will always be here . holla
    and to the others your opinions our very much so appreciated
    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise and yeap we miss ya ....come back ladybug come back !!!

    search party out looking for ya now
     
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    As long as we are missing someone, they remain in our hearts. I've definitely been here poet.
     
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    nice drop feeling this piece
     
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    I feel you all the way poet.
    Nice piece.
     
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