Black Poetry : Missin' Him

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember
    all of me...being with
    ...well
    -- -- some of him

    The aroma of him
    was as fresh as
    wild bergamot
    ... although I don't
    see him much
    now
    ...from time to time
    there is a zephyr
    that slowly carries
    his aura to me
    on the hem
    of a western wind

    Oh, and
    how I remember
    laughing

    and

    all of the playful
    exchanges
    in a game of
    love's
    peek-a-boo

    and

    conversations worth
    honorable mention

    ~ long talks
    that kept my
    heart from rappelling
    down the cliff
    of his open mind

    I remember the
    rare earth element
    of him
    abundantly

    and

    how I would have
    given him the
    sun, moon, stars
    and constellations
    collectively ~
    from now until
    the turn of
    10 future centuries

    and

    I remember
    all of him ...

    the way I used to feel
    when we were together

    the way I could hear
    angels sing in chorus
    when he talked

    the way my soul
    was made moist as
    we kissed

    the way my body
    accepted him intimately
    when he made
    love to me

    I remember ...

    ... I recall ...

    since he
    decided that he was
    not ready to
    be the man
    that I needed him
    to be ~

    I had to let go ...

    So all I remember now
    is that --

    I'm missin' me
    some
    him



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES!

    PART TIME LOVE IS BETTER THAN NO LOVE
    WHAT PART U DID HAVE WAS WORTHY
    YET U WISH FOR ALL .....NOW GONE YA FINE
    SELF LOOKING BACK AND MISSING HIM
     
  3. MoEffective

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    Beautiful




    I wish I was able to feel one tenth of what you expressed.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Soul

    you a mess girl

    ha ha ha

    following your flow
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a good thing you are not talking about me cus my head would be sooo BIG (LOL)
    nice flow poet
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Yep, you're right... I find myself missin' the man I had only 1/2 of in the first place ...

    Thanks for reading me -- as always...

    :heart:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mo'Effective

    Thank you for complimenting
    me on this piece ~ I appreciate
    your words!

    One :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    Hey now... thank you for following my flow... :wink:

    Oneluv.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LMAO @ Shaz

    You're too cute... LOL :wink:

    Thank you for the read... sweetie!
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i remember my love... i'm missin' me some of him, too. this piece is quite nyce, dear friend.
     
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