Quiet Poetry Lounge : Missed You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by black_soul, Sep 13, 2005.

  1. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your brown eyes been missed haven’t seen your smile awhile welcome back

    Keep coming in and out of my life are trying to find something you lack?

    Cause I love to see you hear you see you smile

    Please tell me that your gonna stay for more then awhile

    You do something to me girl ever since day one

    Don’t understand why you had to up and run

    If you were scared to stand up I would have held your weight

    All you had to do was call me aight no such thing as too late

    But you left me only to come back and go it again

    I just sit and shake my head with a hurt grin

    So beautiful so smart why was your life so hard

    See you walking strong but I can still see you war scars

    What did this world do to you when you left my eyes?

    Letting ****** hurt while I stand by and watch your soul die

    But you come back swing punches knock out a grown man

    You got little eyes looking at you so you working on a plan

    Cause she’s your little reason no reason to let her down

    She smiles just like you as I wonder how long your gonna stay around

    Don’t want to get my hopes up cause you might be gone Sunday

    Some day we’ll be able to talk about getting things to swing my way

    Just when we get close you leave my sight

    Some nights sit and wonder if he treats you right

    You go for the dogs and to them you’re just a piece of meat

    But to me just to hear you speak makes my heart overheat

    Your much more then worth your weight your beauty worth the wait

    As I sit back and look at the life you helped create

    Could have loved you better then him beyond compare

    Now I sit and wonder how many times you looked for me and I wasn’t there

    I'm Sorry​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome to the warmth of sharing , caring
    as love is given do spread it back welcome
    as i bless this flow some love from above

    this was warm sweet and dearing through confession
    enjoyed it and look to read more of you soon welcome.
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot for the welcome
     
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    Most welcome Black Soul .......
     
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    hi black soul

    welcome 2 destee black soul. what a way 2 com onboard w such a :lift: piece. it wuz thot-provoking & i enjoyed its content.

    i hope 2 c mor of your work soon.
     
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