Black Poetry : Missed the Mark

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm here moanin' and sweatin'
    like a water pipe's up my ***,
    and you just layin' at the startin' line
    and my car's just about out of gas.

    My eye is bloodshot and buggin',
    they just about to jump from my head
    while ain't a drop of juice hit you,
    you layin' there like you is dead.

    I been humpin' here for hours
    and I ain't missed nary a stroke,
    I've been drivin' steel like John Henry
    your steam engine should be broke.

    Finally, her eyes lit up like Christmas
    and this is exactly what I was told,
    she said, "baby you doin' a **** good job
    'cept you ain't hittin' monkey, you ridin' in a fold.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooohhhhhh

    RA! You keeps me laughin! :laugh:

    thanks for the smile I'm wearing!


    A
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    takes me back to a response you gave me once upon a time...

    ...you're one brave brutha.:)

    keep the groove storyteller.

    peace.
     
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    Ra,

    Fun piece!!! Just don't miss that mark too often now!!! :laugh:

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U Know I like Big Women!

    I likes me some big women. Sometimes it has drawbacks especially when you're working yourself into a heart attack. Still--I was doing the do. Swoosh!

    Ra
     
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    AMUN!!!

    man you gonna kill yourself one day...But if you do, check the target you hitting man......
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cain't Hep It!

    Big legged women turn me on! You know--meat on the bone--and take that any way you want because the pun is intended--ain't nothing better than a big-legged woman except maybe two bi-legged women and that would be heart attack country--I cain't hep it!

    Ra
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ra

    you betta stop!!!!1
     
  9. shaz

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    come on man how does it end what did you do then did she tell you next time bring a friend
    come on man finish the story
    I know one way or the other you had to hit glory
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, Snaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!!! Amun-Ra slow down bro, slow down ( :rolling: )

    one love,blak
     
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