Black Poetry : Missed the Mark Revised

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m here moanin’ and sweatin’
    like a waterpipe’s up my ***.
    You just layin’ there at the startin line
    and my car’s just about out of gas.

    My eyes is bloodshot and buggin’,
    they just about to jump from my head,
    while ain’t a drop of juice hit you
    and you layin’ there like you dead.

    I been humpin’ here four hours
    and I ain’t missed nary a stroke.
    I’ve been drivin’ steel like John Henry,
    your steam engine should be broke.

    Finally, her eyes lit up like Christmas
    and this is what I was told,
    she said, “you doing a really fine job,
    cept that’s not monkey, that’s a fold.”




    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping::jumping: :jumping:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHAT U SAY!!

    NOT A MONKEY BUT A FOLD.....:D
    WELL RIDE IT ANYWAY AS LONG AS U CAN
    DON'T FALL OFF OR IN....
    DES BE OFF DA HOOK ................Ra..:toast:
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's all good

    Maybe it wasn't THE spot but is was a spot and it was good--Ra

    and deep too

    :p
     
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    i ain't saying a word about this one...just know you got me trppin ova here...
     
  5. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say what?!

    fallin out of my chair laughing...too funny

    Jay
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Y'all know how it is!

    Sometiomes we get over enthusiastic and miss the mark--but we still be having a good time

    Ra

    :p
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mm-mm-mm...
    u crazy!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only Way 2 B

    We get some and then we GET some

    Ra

    :p
     
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    Ra.......

    IT WAS DARK DEEP AND GOOD ..........MAN THAT SPOT
    CAN GET HOT TOO.....U KEEP DOING WHAT U DO
    (((DON'T FALL IN BEFORE U CAN GET OUT!!)))
    LMAO @ Ra.....:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
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