Black Poetry : Miss him much...

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  1. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I haven't heard from him
    It's been a few days now
    He won't talk to me
    But I know why

    I feel his distance
    I long for his presence
    My stomach has butterflys
    I miss the smell of his essence

    This is the 2nd time
    I've pushed him to the edge
    I'm scared I won't get another chance
    To have him in my bed

    Picture this:

    His body is lean but strong
    His Luv is thick and long
    His taste is sweetstickysalt
    I am "without" and it's all my fault

    Ok mind get yourself in balance
    Before you loose perception
    This thing can be fixed
    If I change my direction

    Change my negative ways
    Put pure energy into our space
    Let go of past hurts
    Love can conquer hate

    Stop manipulating the relationship
    Stop trying to master-mind the plan
    Allow the universe to work
    It has magik hands

    Sometimes things just are
    So let it be
    My life lesson is to check myself
    Let go....be free
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your tellin it like it is.......

    WELCOME TO DESTEES!!!
    :wave:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been through this too many times...you flowed this well...i like it...
     
  4. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx and much respect SwtT!! It's what I'm feelin....right now!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless u wit love
    welcome to da family of bond feeling ya scribe

    sometime we have to let go and live for self
    even when it's hard tyte scribe u pose
    welcome again ! u kin :) :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello, Imprezz...I see u've posted your first piece...Luvin your flow on this...feelin the message equally!
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the style of this piece, Welcome to Destee's.
     
  8. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx all. I did it at work.... A little heart ache can bring on creativity!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it can ......that's when i really flow when things trouble me
     
  10. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    same here Rich...just let it flow...
     
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