Black Poetry : Miss Easy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Aug 7, 2006.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, girl is it like that?
    this easy? How can it be this fast?

    There was barely enough time to take you in
    your beauty, your style, your grace
    i couldn't have imagined that it would begin
    all so sudden as soon as we embraced

    but now your gone and I long to hold you
    in eternal stages with timeless gazes
    still audible are the last words whispered through
    scarcely moving lips that I can still taste

    I smell the shirt that has your perfume faint
    closing my eyes and opening my heart
    wishing I were in your presence laying
    on your back your smile bright as stars

    how could it be this fast 14 seconds to be exact
    longing to leave with you, entire soul vexed
    complete meltdown of emotions, hard drive crashed
    how can i miss you this much and you just left?
    hurry back
     
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    Can't Hurry Love...

    True Love is always on time A007:hearts4:. The longer the wait, the more intense the encounter:blush: I enjoy this piece...Stupendous:spinstar:

    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love moves in ways unknown quick smooth and sweet
    like this release always on time .....tyte joint A007
     
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    Brother A007 ... i've missed you ... welcome home ... :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. A007

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    thank you Spicy Brown and Rich. Yall know how it is to miss someone as soon as they leave your presence. Selfishness wants them back as soon as they can.

    Destee thank you so much! I'm sorry for the absence. I am very pleased to be back.
     
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    I am so feeln' this piece. Please flo on...

    Much Luv
     
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    It was sweet
    then bitter...

    I know the feelin. Great piece!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back A007 ..good to see you around again,
    tight drop...thanks for sharing it.
     
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    An encounter that just feels right, can never last long enough, nor can the span between the next time be short enough. Longing will do that to ya. Enjoyed your flow.
     
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    Thanks everyone I appreciate the comments
     
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