Black Poetry : Misguided

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thinking:

    Hes been misguided,
    thinkin that the world wouldnt hurt him
    but tha world has just served him
    his last dish this is it ,
    he flabbergasted......

    turnin towards the light and he thought it was hope
    but that light was a rope,
    to hang all tha troubles to choke
    tha struggles no joke
    everywhere he goes
    everywhere he flows
    people wonder why he act like he knows
    he fly

    so tha story goes
    him at his wits
    it doesnt show
    except for tha clip in his waistband ,
    loaded up and ready to go....

    out tha door,
    eyes on him
    people he beef with
    stay creepin,
    husbands jealous of tha don and tha wifes
    that he sleep with

    his life is demeaning,
    one -after the other
    he fulla love but tha snakes are still
    after my brother

    i think of why we gotta do this,
    u know,
    go after each other?
    cause when tha night hits ,and we strike fist to fist
    they'll all be lookin ,after each other

    holdin ,backs with each other
    gats with each other
    tha last of tha fathers
    stay standin'
    watchin over the backs of they mothers

    its hell in here
    and we all been Misguided
    cause when i got sucked in it,
    i only tried to fight it
    and i failed,not only 1nce,
    but twice kid
    this is trife kid
    and theirs a bunch others livin life-less....

    holla1
     
  2. Legacy21

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    Thought provoking piece. Leaving me to wonder why the cycles continue when we can break them. Nice flow, and keep penning the real.

    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the daily flow continues u said it well here
    have my mental wondering why !
     
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    this was nice flowing i enjoyed this and happy to read ya again
    very mental taken.....
     
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    Love this flow, and gets me to ponderin. LURK, it's nice to see ya back.
     
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    Thanks evrybody....glad u diggin this....i miss yall....im here today for a few....
    lemme see whuts goin on in here... :hearthis:
     
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    Tyte flow man! Keep doin ya thing and imma keep on readin. :welldone:
     
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    Lurk it's good to have u back my brother! This flow is on point and ya style is sick somtimes and this is one iof thoose times! :welldone:
     
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    Welcome home Lurk! It's good to have you back!
     
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    thanx ma,lovin tha replies
     
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