Black Poetry : MISGUIDED CONSCIOUS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Looking into the mind
    misguided seem all blind
    speaking of what we see
    without a conscious beat

    knowing but yet don't know
    the story of a poetic blow
    kissing pages wit heart of flow
    taken somewhere out of control
    we still locked in the myth
    of our own consciousness twist

    trying to bond and cling these links
    before our people go under and sink
    in the ocean pre-mo-notions bleep
    from these mixed emotions dat sweep
    as ego's broad , tongues leak
    pen to pad as it's inked to perfection

    my consciousness bud leave a taste
    so sour from da mental mind race
    i search to preach the will and try to
    instill da dream is alive if we stop, listen
    and strive as we unify without liberity
    that's not our tree to be free

    Freedom is what we make from being
    conscious knowledgeable today, tappin
    wisdom feeding da brains to stop the
    myth state of shame that stain da soul
    billions hold we like lost treasures mold
    and turn back to be cold

    my conscious divided in half from da
    wO-man of man traped without bond
    to understand, pushing glory be none
    falling distant from the sun never to
    find sweet african home of da motherland
    trap in this mental bondage state
    yet i rise , i rise to my conscious wise
    not suprised nor mesmerized on fate that
    tell me lies , as long as i'm alive
    my mental mind will continue to rised
    consciously on behalf of u and me
    misguided to long far to long i'm ready
    to return home to my consciousness !

    Can you show where and how to get there.

    A Dyamondluv thought
    Nu~wave~Ink Creation
    2005 Reserved $R
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a innovatively tyte creation
    as i poeticly bow in devistation
    this bomb exploded on the destee nation....
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know it's been a long time Brotha, but I'm glad to see you haven't missed a beat and those skills are shaper than eva!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Godssoulja so many still traped in the myth and being a duplicator
    from the sub-consciousness of America tales without understanding .........


    Thankz Nabraska happy to be reading u ....i'm trying to express da mindful
    conscious of a poet in a Artistic way to free the mind from mental slavery....
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you suceeded wonderfully poet, wonderfully
     
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    Thankz from you i feel my journey will be worth my taken
    the race just started many many miles to go but i know my
    consciousness will take me to a stuning finish big ups Nabraska !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Misunderstandings can cause a bitter taste in the mouths of us all. We all go through our periods of fear and mistrust. I believe that everyone will come to know unity in their own time, hopefully, before it's too late. Thought provoking drop brotha Rich indeed.
     
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    thankz watz surely our tyme clock is running !
     
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    Another master peace my brother.
     
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    thank you my sista Queen ASHANTA
     
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