Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Jan 17, 2008.
Luvher of Life
Something about your poem tells me that you're still trying to convince yourself that what you wrote is true when it is not...at least not yet. When it does become true, you'll never write one single word about her....meaning you will have become healed!!! Loved the poem !!!
Hey Sweet baby_face
So true so true
Sometimes we start on the outside.
When it's what's in the inside that needs to admit
What is best for US.
Like the olds use to say
Misery loves company.
And we have to Stay Focus
Keep bringing it sis.
yes indeed i can see that u ready to move on
once u realize the truth of the inner being.
No, misery is not a friend, but sometimes it becomes comfortable, and that should never be. I felt the emotion within this write.
I feel the purging of it all here. be blessed as you cleanseth yaself. pour ya heart out! feeling the strength in ya poem.
Oh my goodness!!!
Was it that obvious?
I'm glad you loved that poem.
Thanks for your positive words.
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