Black Poetry : Misery Loves Company Part II

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sitting here writing Misery Part II, got me thinking about me and you.
    Why you lie the way that you do.
    All of the pressure from your lies got
    me bugging.
    Now Misery , Regret and me are hugging.
    Sit down to one cup of tea and spilled my guts to old Misery.
    She wore that old familiar smile on her face.
    She told me to trust is a dang disgrace.
    "Don't you know they are all dogs and liar's!" If I had some money I would have printed up fliers.
    Regret just shakes her head and sips.
    She said she don't do nothing unless it involves some tips.
    Said men are good for just two things maybe three and half the time it don't have nothing to do with you or me.
    So here I sit in this sad sack shack.
    With a briar crown and a cross on my back.
    All of my hopes are shattered and scattered, you took care of that with your irreverent chatter.
    Misery laughs at my gullible heart.
    Says she tried to tell me from the start.
    That "Love don't love nobody"!
    Regret shakes her head again and says, that I can be their new best friend.
    I snarl my lip like Elvis and place my hands on my shapely hip joined at my pelvis...
    Wait a minute, I been here before, I
    don't even remember walking through the door.
    You tricked me again I shout...Now both you heifer's get the Hell out!
    I know I got issues about trust and such, but all this "Pitty Party" mess is getting to be to much.
    I got to dust my butt off and get back in the stream, there are more fish out there and I am going to catch my dream.
    Now, I may be back I can't make a promise...but I tell you this and that's for sure, next time I will make it my business to check the brother out.
    I won't leave room for suspicion and doubt, no questions unasked or unanswered and nothing left to chance. And most of all I will tell him to keep it in his pants...until I get a solid
    committment...my thong will be sealed with cement!
    So says you smirks MS.Misery, I'll see you later..."Not if I see you first I holler!"
    Regret just laughs that cackle of hers and says, that's what they all say...she will be back some day.
    Those love relationships keep us with company for sure...to bad those humans don't know how to endure.
    So off I go determined to be strong.
    To hold on to my dignity and not to go wrong. To tame my Aries temper and let my God do the rest, and in my next romance put a brother to the test.
    I am a Queen and I deserve the best.
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: yup been waitin for the next one...and I'm glad i did :)
    you are right... you do deserve the best :)
     
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    ooooooooohhhh Sister MsLuciousB !!!! :toast:

    i enjoyed this immensely !!! had alla us over here laff'n at alla yall over there ... :) ... great work ! ... let me go find Part I ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    dis was off the hook sistah u
    really amaze me here in aweeeee!!!
    wow!
    love it
     
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    this was tight...
    stuck on every word...
    nice
     
  6. msluciousb

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    Thanks my fellow scribes and Queen mother Destee!

    My repertoire is growing steady and strong with the Destee fam to carry me along, look for me to contiue to grow and it's because of you and your love and I want you to know!
    Blessings On Your house!
    Y'all are just super EXCELLENT SUPPORT!
     
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    indeed we are all bonding as one
    ya flow is smooth , sweet and unique
    have me dancing on my feet
    flow head on sistah and drop dem vibes
    most welcome Queen
     
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    i loved this...yeah pity parties are the worse parties of all! glad you kicked them two tricks out the door! much love to you
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    this was spectacular! how true how true
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the enthusiasm...

    Makes me glad to be a part of this team!
    To see your responses how my eyes and heart do gleam...my most humble appreciation for you taking the time to read me!

    Blessings On Ya Houses!
     
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