Black Poetry : Mirrors of My Soul

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are times when I feel the world is too cold,
    But then there's the warmth of your heart that shelters my heart and soul.
    I can stand to stare at you for every breathing moment,
    And love, your love fulfills my desires gives me passion that's so potent.
    Where we've been and where we're going is two very different places,
    But we have to appreciate what we have, so much admiration as we look in each others' faces.
    I'm calmed after many scary storms, for you're my medicine,
    I dred those who've never experienced what we have, but I'll never act as if I'm better than them.
    I look at their lives and see I'm a living blessing,
    For they have been through some of the things I have
    yet they've missed the many lessons.
    You're my reward for my good deeds, and sure, there have been so many,
    And you make up for the futuristics, that I know there would be plenty.
    A union in the name of love, this couldn't have been a better perfection,
    Because when I see you, I see myself in my heart and soul's reflection. ​
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhh yes you catching the love is in the air thing like me gurl. love how you put it down on this one. do flo on sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warmth of love cascading deep as i take a deep breath
     
  4. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    a beautiful reflection on love....makes me wish I had that special someone to share with....

    phenomenal write, angel.
     
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    Nice read
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