Black Poetry : Mirror! O'Mirror!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hanging alone
    as day grown
    mirror mirror
    on da wall
    tell me mirror
    u make da call

    what u see
    reflects of thee
    never never mirror
    they say it's me
    how can it be
    my name is poetry

    I come in bright colors
    dressed real smooth
    take many in my groove
    so mirror mirror how can
    it be and what they see

    ur da creator da hand
    to face the words u leave
    as it take ya pleace
    but mirror face goes
    to da wall that can't be
    of me at all
    ur a poem a scribe inside
    this what da mirror vibe
    ur life of expression
    words of compassion
    mesmerizin deep affection
    is u not of !
    i am and i see
    mirror mirror dat's really me
    but u hang on da wall
    u never ever flip or fall
    but reveal and never stall
    so u make da call
    who the one where they be
    can u mirror help me

    da one is raw , warm and free
    this reflection u will see in me
    i stain the glass answered
    ya call notice u looked no
    cracks at all
    but they dip low and spring high
    some even whisper a lie
    folks dimple inside da reason
    like dis da only season mirror
    i see u as u see self deep inside
    ya heart knows da rest to caress
    so speak da mirror! :spinstar: :huh: :spinstar:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wheeew..ok this says alot...
    look on in da mirror
    it will all come to light
    poetry have many faces
    and so do a poet
    to create masterpieces
    on many levels
    and dis poem
    got many meanings
    i hear ya
    nice write
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz as it looks back in da mirror
     
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    Tight piece!!keep writing,liked it a lot! :luvv:
     
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    Many facets here. The mirror reflects what is both seen and unseen, just like poetry and the poets who pen the words. I'm into this piece, and appreciate the style.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was all over this rich:toast:

    flow on....

    :heart:
     
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    Mirrors, mirrors, mirrors ...the only thing a mirror can't do..."is lie" I admired this piece a lot. It sees all of the "You's" there is...
    very nice write.
     
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    Ahhhh, beautiful and satisfying piece, $$RICH$$. You sure know how to bring it. Much love to you.
     
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    Brotha Rich, I know about the mirror.
    I've had to face myself in it a lot.
    Wonderful piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thanks family it's da mirror of self wow !!
    thanks gempis
    thanks propheticNsyght
    thanks queentswana
    thanks swtT
    thanks Andreattah
    thankz watz
     
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