Black Poetry : Mirage

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  1. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    Her kiss was heaven
    Permeating my being
    Like cosmic rays
    Outshining my sunny days
    Like a flourescent light
    In your living room when you pull the shades
    Pulled away
    And got pulled back in
    Wrapped up, tied up, tangled up,
    Told what to do
    And whats more, i'm doing it
    True, in it
    Freedom rings release from stress and things
    On golden wings
    Of saraphim
    Sadly demeaned
    Singing sullen hymns
    Of angel in disguise
    So sweetly surprised
    Discreetly blind
    To frozen fingers on flaming mics
    Not everything good is right
    Like,
    The kiss that broke my heart
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we offten let that single kiss do a bliss on us
    and we wait for another and another ......**** the
    lip lock they posed
    nice read & flow !!!!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice read
     
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    is a kiss ever really just a kiss...

    the many facets of a woman and what she can do to a mans heart...

    K
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eternal

    hi and welcome I'm sure you were but I'm the family member that can't resist buying computers from friends, family members, and Pookie and his associates, therefore I always miss out on a lot. So keep a sistas computer issues in your thoughts :D (preciate that). i like the flow of this read and I am looking foward to reading more.




    One
     
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    You've felt my sorrow

    I'm feeling this piece.
    Can feel it from the bottom of my broken heart.
    Fa realz
    Dynamite!
    I've felt love like this before. all too recently.
    Go on ahead
    Encore. "Keep the flow"
    Desert Storm
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's unanimous, this is a Hit!

    The flow is smooth, the content ripe and relatable.
    You didn't mind going where it hurts a little bit and
    that is the true measure of an Artist who is willing
    to suffer for his/her art!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    swooning

    b/c this piece brings a bright smile to my face

    keep spreadin the love

    pd :heart:
     
  9. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    a genuine thank you to you all I don't get online often which is what takes me so long to reply to your replies but thanks.
     
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