Black Poetry : Mirage

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trudging through
    the hot sands of my
    day to day
    Parched and dry
    from the sweltering
    heat, almost exhausted, I take
    A labored breath. Suddenly
    I am rejuvenated from my wake
    inhaling a gust of lavender breeze.
    A cushion of clover growing
    under my weary feet, leads me
    to a sparkling waterfall, flowing
    lilac hues
    and royal blues
    immersed under the fingers
    of a liquid massage
    my body lingers....
    in this mirage
    pausing...
    in this daydream of you...
     
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    watz your imagery got me daydreaming too...must be nice. loved the flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    made me look off into this place so sweet & divine u took me there !
    very nicely done sista wow!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the luv on the flow phenomenal. Daydreaming can be like taking a mini vacation sometimes.
    Glad to know you liked this Rich, and that the words took you to that place. Thank you brotha.
     
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    This was so comforting Watz

    Loved the vibe.
     
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    ooo yeah, this is pretty, girl.
     
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    This made me wanna get lost in a daydream too...it was wonderful.
     
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    I agree with gempis. this was very pretty. You took me on that poetic ride.:)
     
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    A beautiful thought and moment of peace. Keep flowing.
     
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    lovely vision of a dream...very nice imagery watz

    one love
    khasm
     
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