Black Poetry : mine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by icabob36, Jul 31, 2003.

  1. icabob36

    icabob36 Member MEMBER

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    this this this is mine for years ive searched for the perfect grind now is my time to shine though life seems dreary all day around me i will shine it aint that im mad and got a axe to grind its just this darkness and i wanna shine from the time i wake till the time i meet my fate see i was just athought until the lord breathed and iwas brought out of one dark place into a world the handed me dark dates you ever seen an angel wit out wings hell thats me so please tell me how im suppose to fly how can i get to heaven and walk streets of gold i asked my momma my friends but they dont know so i decided to shine cause ive searched for years for the perfect grind and i know its my time to shine see it just clicked one day and isaid to myselfwhy dwell is that dark place i dun see drunken dreams to smoked out one night flings to doing gangsta things and im still here hell i betta shine even when i mad and think i got a axe to grind when things seem depressing i know to keep pressing when tihngs get hard iknow to look back and see how far ive come how far ive gone and how close to hell iwas brung so feel me when isay imust shine imust kick open the mental wall in front of me and holla back at that old grind cause that time has ended like all time . one.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee!!!!!!!!!

    this is a heartfelt scribe...i hope to see more from you...
     
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    Icabob36 welcome!!! I'm diggin' your chain-link flow to the max... baby!
     
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    Welcome to the fam...like how you flowed with this....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da family of flow and love
    welcome dis tyte scribe u drop upon us
    happy ya here to share ya wisdom.......keep flowin'
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im so feelin this.. its not even funny, how much i like this.
     
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    Welcome.....nice flow, feelin your message!

    (Fav, part - so feel me when isay imust shine imust kick open the mental wall in front of me and holla back at that old grind cause that time has ended like all time)

    Peace!
    Angelic
     
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    thank you much for all the love. one
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the Fam!!!

    :wave:

    Tyte flow!
     
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    everyone has an old grind...
    this was real
    peace
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