Black Poetry : MINDZ STRUGGLE / I WEEP DA BLOOD pt.2

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Struggling in the mist of life
    told me of death,blist of whips
    fifty lashies,slumbering linching
    still mindz under myth submission
    i weep da blood !

    Brotherhood stolen to breed
    to bring slavery new deed
    sisterhood raped & stripped
    thy womb tame dread they stood
    in deep depression worlds misguide
    how my mental cried da stain tears

    realism that fertilized , absorbed in
    deep blackness still thy people turn
    from awarness how i weep from the
    divided structure we struggle to unify
    united way lost in da maze of mental
    dismay enslaved day by day naked
    thoughts beaten scald skepticism a
    vision doom the dream vanishing into
    long memories i weep da blood

    My consciousness Afrocentric taste
    the pain the salty sail of death ships
    journey beyond the landz of home free
    now entraped in the American system
    of depression sour love and proverty
    through mirrow image upon walls
    i hear the motherland & ancestors calls
    between seas of delusional decay and
    betrayal of thy justice free be not of
    this land of tyme divided false temptation
    painfully i weep da blood how we lost way
    yet we stay in the myth of mental enslavery
    withdrawing the afrocentric mind to endure

    We been deem by the land of no liberty
    kept at bay of slavery by the mindz that's
    shackled in bondage believing in the myth
    that was breed to teach the massa way
    forefathers turn in hasso distant life sustained
    by the tongues of thy people the mind traped
    in america from da groundz of mother Africa
    we can't join links but walk chained minded
    like shuttle weaving unequal justice of verbal
    web weed by our own creed to the man's deed
    i weep da blood today for tomorrow future

    struggling at the mind discussing works of long
    ago masterful strolls fighting for human rights
    struggling to feel the depth of hope when so
    many still hang from da rope i struggle to feed
    mentally from da great sadden Africa lives still
    living in today's tomorrow all my impetuous
    thoughts lay on the Nemesis of deceit massa
    stored to thy brains staining our worth & growth
    i weep people da blood of black on black
    brutha vs brutha , sista against sista self inflicked
    hate / jealousy / and pass pain of depressional life
    we battle prophecy of teaching from englishmen
    we fight for power of self and use da tongue sword
    to cut down mindz enslaved to destructional clash
    to destroy nations of creed i weep da blood

    explored the past walking in ancestor's path
    forsaken ancient belief we vision beyond our
    souls entrampment in da land of no free i cry
    on the mystic dreams dem flooding communities
    with drugs / pushing the will of guns to our sons
    tell thug life is right .....strong yet they wrong
    controlling sistas hearts by mislead deed they
    become death angels da struggle of life delt
    harvest from American society i weep , i weep
    da blood to rise to lift to spread so forth thy
    future can grow unto wisdomized knowledge
    living our lives in technicolor i sit here sound mind
    a free mind with vast cloud and see immenseness
    of the worlds differents as generations cross from
    X to Y under the mental enslavery lost in the myth
    of american unfairly , corrupted unjust body this land
    feed the divided practices i weep da blood of color
    dats code RED !



    A Dyamondluv struggle
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang man wow keep flowing
     
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    thankz Froggy1 man it's tyme to fee da mindz from
    this mental struggle that divided us deeply and keep
    us in proverty & depression big up brutha ............
     
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    MINDZ clouded in notion
    of sour promotion of life
    we change by our own emotion
    this was a ne-wave tyme to
    rise as people to unify ............
     
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    The mindz in shackles that still seem unbreakable. There was so much fire and emotion within these words just shouting to be heard. Flow on, let the mind speak.
     
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    the mental chain need to be broken as it's a long chain
    linking thy people at birth a never ending tale of deep
    struggle da myth and depressional maze of black life

    peace be still as truth rumbles thoughts and open mindz
    Thankz watz as the mission is a task so strong .............
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know how i feel about your scribes when they come like this....

    sounds like black souls of poetry flow head on
    I am loving it!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Thank you Angel the poetic mind of black unity i seek
    and to get there is to free da mindz of american society myth
    fed to us from da days of slavery that still remain in brains
    so washed in the depression of struggle ......we need to think
    for ourselves now .....peace & love to Africa
     
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    Da struggle continues
    the mind not free somehow we're find this unity
    I weep da blood code red.
     
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    this mindz struggle was mindblowing ba. mindblowing
     
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