Black Poetry : MINDZ IN STRUGGLE / I WEEP DA BLOOD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Repressing fear words i feel
    frustration deeper in my soul
    the spirit lifted mind stained
    the struggle continues

    without consequences & hope
    by faith yet reckless experiment
    creates a failure of innocence
    momentarily , i scream aloud
    nothing cures the moment i face
    i sense distrust by tthe aggressive
    tongue cutting at the souls of
    thy people i cry in the congo tears

    suspended by denounced reality
    some will never see or observe
    the greater morbidity the struggle
    continues under superior America
    high rank flaws of laws to substain
    our lifting da mindz traped in the
    maze of practice da terror of death

    dying in the illusional sorrow as pain
    capside the worth of thy people to
    open da flood gate a deep reflection
    presented in realistic remorse of legends
    who died in the mist of struggle these
    overexposed bodies lay in the stilliness
    yet to awaken by the goodness of
    intention forth the forefathers speaketh

    sleep well i tell ya ! because we failing
    the knowledge of left wisdomized harvest
    planted we struggle to see the fruitful dayz
    given and mindz bondage in jealousy of creed
    da hate rise beyond the hills , sleep well i say
    because the day wilt in greed i weep da last
    indingo rain fall unto the struggling life we delt
    dynamicly continuing clinging we lost way
    to unite a long patient vigil toward utility union

    I still worship the mighty afrocentric land of thy
    mother she spreads in false groundz many have
    betrayed her worthy cry without necessary means
    the struggle sails sea on the poison ship of capitivity
    to soaring heights of destructionalize waters
    anger hangz ova my head , sadness instill, deep !
    deep depression dwells beyond communities but
    cross cities / states and landz in a circular fashion
    i cry in the mango of beats as acient drums tap
    compulsional still obsession to move control me
    to speaketh , teach and reach what allows me
    the struggle is larger then life today we shame
    thy face to reality and for go unity to resound life
    i'm buried alive by handz of my creed from the
    maze of divided practice & experience our newly
    generations transcending unjustice way for
    liberity stand not to our consciousness of hope

    I weep , i weep today for da struggle live upon
    thy people cross da nationz i weep in da blood
    red and spill upon the landz and lack of i weep
    staining paths of swelling cries doom inside
    da struggle continues not Free'd the mindz yet
    in bonded chains shackled down in myth making
    History i weep da blood and feel the rumble of
    groundz of the un-living as ancestors turn
    we now time our days to rise in hope keep a
    dream and enhance our tomorrow building in
    today as people to deem da struggle we facing

    Da Struggle continues i weep da blood of thy creed :crying
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    King $$RICH$$........

    Royal, No! A "Devine" flow. This peace envoked tears.
    Tears not in the strict sense of the pain caused by the memories of the last 400 yrs.
    But rather tears we all will shed for future geneartions if we don't find a way to not only get a grasp on our true destiny, but also if we as a people don't re-define the concept of destiny. A working, applicable destiny.

    Thanks my "Brother-Poet-Prophet" for we are truly blessed to have your heart, soul and wize wordz to watch over us.

    Peace Power and Prosperity
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Struggle

    Rich, this is a powerful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Afrostotle......we as people of the people for the people will indeed weep
    throughout our future growth if we don't seek answers without self hate
    without flicked pain to thy creed our brotherhood / sisterhood in the divided
    notions but share a common unity as people to deem da deep struggle we
    face and see the pain of he motherland hear they cry of our afro-nation we
    will weep into depression that looms .......Thankz a million for hearing da
    tears of blood spilled .

    peace & lovin unity unto u ..


    Thank u poetrymama ....time we share commonly and work on the struggle
    of our people our lives and community we have to start somewhere somehow
    and stop the cry of blood the tears of pain and this heavy depression of color.
     
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    This was a very deep and loud speaking peice i really got into this
    my brother you know you know.....love this right here!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thankz Angel our people struggle is felt
    day to day from the self flicked womb
    the tears of blood has stain the landz
    and ancestors lay in stillness from the
    mindz shackled in the myth of todays
    life i weep da blood .....Thankz for feeling
    the world wide cry .
     
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    Yes the struggle continues, and will until we feel we don't have the need to constantly watch our backs from...each other, of all people. Thank you for giving us something to think about poet.
     
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    dang man wow true true
     
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    see watz it's the common ground we stand that flick pain
    we have to feed our mindz the afrocentric way and let the myth
    of american life out there our change can be the future growth
    the struggle is so depressing so hard and deem a deed to destroy
    what we believe how we stand and what we learn the tears of blood
    runs heavy i weep ....thankz sista for feeling the struggle of thy people .


    Froggy1 indeed the truth be told through lyrical feed that the people see
    how this struggle is dividing us as people the womb is salty and in pain
    the landz of liberity is so corrupted that it has poison mental mindz of thy
    people we deem to hurt each other from the past pain flicked by the
    american society we have to unify in unity and unite our way home to clean
    our mind from the struggle of depression ., Thankz for listening to reality
    the life we live and our mindz

    peace & harmony from within as i weep the blood .......
     
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    pt.2 of this series coming soon check in to feel the mindz in struggle !
    peace.....
     
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