Black Poetry : minds eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even though I haven’t seen your face...in my minds eye I have...touched your smooth caramel mocha skin...like the finest silk from Spain...looked deep into your beautiful eyes...and saw my soul resting there...Traced the smoothness of your lips...with my fingertips.... To the outline of your heart in my hands.... I have walked a thousand miles just to be with you… sat next to you as we watched the waves splash upon the shore… Listened quietly to your words of wisdom… even though your mouth never opened… Reached out and touched the stars and brought them back… lighting your path to me… wishing that we could be…but knowing…that right now…is just not the time…so I go back to my minds eye…and meet you in my dreams….

    To you…for touching my soul…:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico....this is so beautiful :) I know that whomever you wrote this for is feelin this b/c I know that I am....:)
     
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    Rico, this is beautiful! I hoe whoever the lucky girl is, she realizes what she could have! Much love my brother!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed she must feel ya vibe
    as she should read ya scribe
    tyte flow on her mind
    dis my brutha is smooth & devine
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico, your flow is always deep and heavenly...had me sitting on clouds with this one, captured the mental and the emotions! Much luv to u, keep the ink flowin!
     
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    beautiful, how you flow,
    and how the way your words touch the soul,
    feeling all the tracing of those finger tips..
    the warmth grows from your flow...wonderful
    Peace
     
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